MG SS: Beholding Trust |last part page 44 | July 6th, 2022 - Page 21

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarojatula

Part 2

Where is Geet's daughter? Is she not with her? Geet is worried about Maan. Nice update. Please send me the password for parts 3 and 4. I think this will be an ss

Thanks

No I will not stretch it

It will destroy the essence of the Story.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 3

Maan wants geet to take to party but hesitate to tell jer

Lets see how will he say her

Feeling sad fr geet she suffered so much hope she tell maan about her daughter

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice start. Maan's first wife Divya died due to brain tumer after few months of their marriage. It has been four years and now Dadima and Divya's parents wanted Maan to remarry. Maan is remarried to Geet who is a widow. Maan feels that Geet is worried for some reason and decided to ask her the reason.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Please send me pw for part 2.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beholding Trust



Teaser



Shona.. you will never leave your mumma.. geet kissed her baby's forehead. She was still weak with the long lasting labor but the moment her baby was placed in her arms, she shed all those tears that she was holding till now.



Geet caressed the face of her little angel. She knew that now her life will not be like it used to be like. The baby was born premature but she was a fighter like her mother. She was only a day old but she was now the reason that geet was living.


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Mumma please don't do this to me. My baby how I will live without her. Please mumma. Geet begged her mother. Her mother took geet in her embrace but she didn't said a word.



Geet think about yourself. We will take care of our granddaughter. Please bacha don't do this to yourself.



Mumma I will live for my child. Please I don't want anyone in my life. Geet pleaded.



Geet please try to understand. We are not your enemies. We will take care of your baby. Geet bacha please maan ja. She tried to reason but this time geet shouted on them.



Nahi.. I will not sab wo hi karte hain jo wo chahte hain. Kisi ko meri parwa nahi hai. Mein kya chahti hun. Pehle bola mein apna bacha maar dun. Ab aap bolte ho mein ise akela chod dun. Kyun.. leave me.. geet pushed her mother angrily unknown to the truth that was making her parents helpless.



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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice teaser. So this is the reason of Geet's sadness as she had to leave her baby

Thanks for pw.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I am back to GF after a long time. Now I want to read all new stories and updates so please send me pm and pw. You started new story Ruswa yesterday but I got no pm and pw. Please add me in your pm list as in past also I always read and comment on your updates.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

I am back to GF after a long time. Now I want to read all new stories and updates so please send me pm and pw. You started new story Ruswa yesterday but I got no pm and pw. Please add me in your pm list as in past also I always read and comment on your updates.

Ruswa's password is on the thread. I don't send PM's now.

Some parts are always open.

I did send u pm today for Beholding Trust.

U can check your PM's.

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Posted: 5 years ago

emotional teaser! feeling for Geet.

will she tell Maan about her baby?

continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

very sad teaser

waiting for update

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