Mini SS - Deewani ( Completed )

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#241

sorry for late likes and comments!

Part 4

exceptional update! well written! she has realised that he does not love her! as expected Geet decides to move on but its not easy! she loves Maan so much but he has hurt her!

her friends are supportive! its hard for Geet to move on! liked her determination!

Maan's mom knows he loves Geet but Maan denies!

Geet wants to leave his house as well!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#242

Part 5

perfect update! awesomely written!

glad Geet's friends are taking her out! they want get to spend time with Jai!

at least Geet had fun with Jai! Geet cannot forget Maan!

so Maan is back! liked that Geet was ignoring him! Maan closeness is affecting her but she controls!

finally Geet confronts Maan! her anger is justified! surprised seeing a jealous and possessive Maan!

Maan is indeed confident! he kisses her and she is stunned!

update soon

thanks for the pm

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 6 years ago

#243

Awesome

Geet friends fixed hr outing with jai and she enjoyed it but feel bad fr him bz she thought he liking hr but she can't return with same feelings

Maan came back and he get to know about jai and Geet and also she leaving KM

Maan y questioning Geet. Is he feels insecure he thought Geet never move on

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Sneha

@neasya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#244

Awesome update dear...

Good that geet didn't go behind maan to Mumbai and finally maan kissed her...

Hope geet will not become puppy again...

Will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 6 years ago

#245

Part 5
Good Geet went out with JAI
But maan baby was back hearing thi
He kept talking nonsense with his mom
Yet he didn't want Geet to forget about him
Muje Yeh easy end acchi nahi lagi
Maan must suffer
Tuh humesha maan khi side kyun lehthj hai
Kyunnn

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 6 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
sorry for late likes and comments!

Part 4

exceptional update! well written! she has realised that he does not love her! as expected Geet decides to move on but its not easy! she loves Maan so much but he has hurt her!

her friends are supportive! its hard for Geet to move on! liked her determination!

Maan's mom knows he loves Geet but Maan denies!

Geet wants to leave his house as well!

Don't say sorry 😊

Thnx for reading chetna

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 6 years ago

#247

Wanted to finish it today ..but bad luck bettery low+ power cut can't edit or post uurgh

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#248

Part 2

Dear math

Please move on from your X 🤣

Geet is such a cutie..

Oh my uska crush toh shadi tak ka hai..and her mummyji I mean mother in law is also supporting wow..

Bas Maan Babu Maan jaye..

Maan is a total sadu..

Loved it Sabina

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#249

Part 3

How rude is Maan seriously

Geet is a dumbo here

Why can't she just give this man a dose of his own words and feelings..

Phir geet k pheeche pheeche aayega..

Geet is just like an ordinary girl trying hard to change and win her love and Maan instead of even showing that acknowledge doesn't even do anything good..

Good that he and that Riya are there

Deserve each other..

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 6 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Part 2
Dear math

Please move on from your X 🤣

Geet is such a cutie..
Oh my uska crush toh shadi tak ka hai..and her mummyji I mean mother in law is also supporting wow..
Bas Maan Babu Maan jaye..
Maan is a total sadu..

Loved it Sabina

About math o share the same feeling with Geet 😡 grow up math