OS : Khafa Khafa

Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Uff!!! The forum has become so slow. Nothing I do seems to bring a change.😒

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Few months and so big a change. I'm finding it so sad. People are not interested in discussions. Not interested in stories. I thought mine must not be as good. But every story's response is low unless writer puts some demand which I think undermines the foundations of an open forum. In an open forum if you have to force someone to express their view or share their thoughts, What's the use of such platform. This is a sad affair soon I guess the forum will close down or will become like other dormant ones.

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Hooo Maan is definitely Man of steel ... how he controlled !!! Chalo Geet ka plan worked ...they won't die unsatisfied lol
Actually I love the convo between them ...fun N witty ...
I like your writing style ... keep writing
This is so fun loveee it

Thanks dreamer. 😃 glad you liked the dialogues.

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MomiArti
Superb os.geet seduced maan because he is angry and take a oath not to touch her.waiting for more

Thank you for reading. This was one a one shot. There won't be any more parts.

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Will read and comment later when either in office or at home

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: taahir004
Will read and comment later when either in office or at home

Read at your leisure Taahir. I am just worried about the slow traffic in the forum.

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Hi Nohar

Lovely OS...

His desperation, her outburst, his anger, his hurt, her manana, his ruthna and bhaaw khana, her seduction, his self control slipping away and finally loosing control was too lovely

loved the Hanuman ji wala part...he is so good with come backs...

so like father like daughter...both are fans of Madhuri Dixit...hehe...nice

loved it dear

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Well Nohar,

Its the first time I read something from you and I absolutely loved it

congrats for this lovely OS

and yaar It did remind me of the Khafa Khafa song too...

KUdos and keep writing and help us keep the Maaneet magic alive

LOve

Sahiba

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar
Girls, don't stop being my friends thinking that I'm a gandi bacchi for writing such stuffs. Leaving occasional deviations , I'm usually a good girl. 😆

Don't worry babydoll...I am sure we all have the traces of gandi bachi within us...

so never mind...am sure all of us enjoyed this gandi bachi version...😉

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Sahiba

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Posted: 6 years ago

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