OS - Want To Be Yours

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: neenav2Dd
It's amazing
Loved it

Hey neena good to see you

Glad you liked 😊

Quote

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aparna3011
very emotional story
amazing

Thnx for reading dear

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Awesome OS. Geet loves Aryan and going to be married with him. But he did not show up on the marriage day. Maan who is her father's friend's son saved her and her family reputation by marrying her. Geet is so angry with Maan. She cursed Maan for marrying her and asked why he married her. To which he answered that he wanted to be hers.
Is there any more parts of this os as it looks incomplete.

As of now there won't be another part , future may be but no guranty

Thnx for reading dear

Quote

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
welcome back Sabina!

Congrats on another OS!

emotional OS! superbly written! hated that Geet accuses Maan! glad that he clarified everything!

feeling for Maan! Will Geet ever fall in love with him? can understand her dilemma! hope she moves on...

request that you kindly continue! thanks

It's old os so I don't remember further story...i written it as OS only

Will try no promise though

Thnx for reading 😊

Quote

Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#35

nice one...will u write another part of it? it seems incomplete

Quote

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: paponecon
nice one...will u write another part of it? it seems incomplete

I didn't plan sorry

Quote

Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

I loved the depiction of the situation at the end.

Geet is in such a state where what she wants, she herself knows is not going to happen that is Neel agreeing to marriage.

While Maan is clear in his thoughts about his love, He has taken a step for that. He would not have interfered had it not been the marriage fiasco. Only thing that he should have discussed with Geet before the marriage.

Now after his confession, she finds her more helpless and confused about her own life. She does not want to hurt Maan for she can't bring herself to not love Neel and eventually will hurt him. It may remain like that for a small phase or for a lifetime. Hope it does not take a lifetime for Geet to know what she wants, but then life and human emotions are really complicated that way.

Quote

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
I loved the depiction of the situation at the end.
Geet is in such a state where what she wants, she herself knows is not going to happen that is Neel agreeing to marriage.

While Maan is clear in his thoughts about his love, He has taken a step for that. He would not have interfered had it not been the marriage fiasco. Only thing that he should have discussed with Geet before the marriage.

Now after his confession, she finds her more helpless and confused about her own life. She does not want to hurt Maan for she can't bring herself to not love Neel and eventually will hurt him. It may remain like that for a small phase or for a lifetime. Hope it does not take a lifetime for Geet to know what she wants, but then life and human emotions are really complicated that way.

You said everything 😊

Quote

Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Awesome OS baby

As always maan is so selfless , even after knowing of his unrequite love 😭

Now geet confronts the harsh reality , now the big question is will she able to love him , at least she can try for maan

Please do continue this one

Quote

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Awesome OS baby
As always maan is so selfless , even after knowing of his unrequite love 😭

Now geet confronts the harsh reality , now the big question is will she able to love him , at least she can try for maan

Please do continue this one

Yaar I don't know what to write further that's why it's only OS...

I can't promise but Will try