PYAAR - a myth or truth (part 4 updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely simple story 15years girls talk about dream husband
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Character Sketch is so Interesting

Maan's siblings are married already
seems like both Maan and Geet will be about the same age in this story
and that's fantastic
both families has small businesses

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

Beautiful Part

Geet's imagination about her future alliance seems so real
as in the manner she speaks about it , she describes every moment
so beautiful
waiting to see when she grows into a young lady will she still have these dreams and will her dreams come true or just stay as dreams

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good luck Jyoti
enjoy writing 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3

Slowly slowly time goes on n geet finds a boy amit in her clases to which she gets attracted n feels for him but again for her family values she just don't tell anyone about it

But she just hd crush on him but never said any thing to amit also when he proposed her but instead she says that he is just a gud frnd of her. N she just reduces her talks with him .

( plsss yr just remember she was hvng a teenage infactuation on amit nothing more than that just a passing feeling n plss don't get confused regarding their relationship he is ,was n will remain her bestest frnd forever n will help her in future also. But here our geet is a kind of girl who luvs to get into a relationship only after marriage. )

At that time geet was of 21 yrs an aliance came for her of vikas n she gets whatever she hd dreamt of him in him

Each thing about this alliance was very special to our geet be it the first meeting , or roka cermany , or their dance, or his holding hands of her in complete ceremony or their talks on phone or late ngt msg chats .

She was very happy n got a new glow on her face in just a few days n was experiencing a totally new feeling

But just after 5 days their relation gets broken due to the fact that they r asking for excessive dowry which her family found out in time

geet break down as in those 5 days she gets attracted to him n hd seen many dreams

But she doesn't knew that her every dream is meant to be break

It was very difficult for her as its first time she was living her dreams (remember guys she was dreaming of marriage from the age of 15 n here vikas fits in the dreams )

But again she just thought maybe god wants me to hv smon better

N when she was 22yrs old again an alliance came for her of none other than of our maan singh khurana

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Posted: 6 years ago
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awesome character sketch! thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

thanks for the pm!

terrific update! superbly written!

Liked Geet's dreams about her marriage!


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3

superb update! nicely written! thanks 4 da pm!

Geet so happy about her alliance but sad when it breaks off! glad that it broke up now than later! how dare they ask for dowry!

now another alliance came for Geet and its MSK!

update soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3

Lovely Chapter

In school Geet had a passing crush but due to her morals and values she did
not act on her crush when she turned 21 years her dream came true
as her alliance with Vikas was fixed and he fitted her dream sequence
perfect but the alliance broke as Vikas family wants lots in dowry
now that Geet has turned 22 years she gets another alliance from Khuranas
and its for Maan
now I'm looking forward to seeing how will both Maan and Geet be together will they like
each other instantly or not
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Posted: 6 years ago
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part 2 n 3
very sweet update
teenager geet dream about her marriage which partially coem to her in the form of vikas which is break due to dowry making geet sad but after one year maan's alliance come hoping to see progress
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