ARDHANGINI ** UPDATE Pg.121, 122** 18/05/19 - Page 17

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update dear mann takes Geet to his room and talk to her told she is his but she told that she was child at that time no one was present at that time and know she is not worth of him and left after he came to know from his mom what happened to Geet
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wonderful updates...loved it..meera with her family came for engagement... oh no beautiful geet as a child was kidnapped by devil dev for 2 hrs only but somehow rescued by her family member so to protect her from the devils she was sent to Mussorrie...as meera relation with geet was in KM & was busy to welcome them by serving food etc... maan was stunned to know gayatri as geet... wow geet was very well mixed with khurana family...awe panditji asked for bujias which nobody knows to prepare it...!! maan somehow manged to take geet in his room as he wanted to tell her about his heart feeling for her...and came to know his confusion about Gayatri as Geet but shocked to hear about geet childhood bad patch which he could not able to think about her impure & pure status..after his sleepless night for geet's history he asked to his mom who told all incidents...he was right as a kid she could not understand pure & Impure in case anybody blamed her with it...nice maan was fully faith on geet & he should carefully removed it from geet's mind also ...next morning maaneet were in KC where geet asked maan to be professional to call her as gayatri instead of geet in the office...awe maan was jealous to see geet surrounded by male colleagues & got angry on them... wow dadaji & dadiji came to KC& maaneet took their blessings which dadaji appreciated geet's brought up... awe dadaji came across sasha & disgusted with her modern outfit which he ordered to handle her full size cloths heehee... excited for maaneet togetherness.. thanks for pm...take your own time ...hope all is well...!!



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Posted: 6 years ago
Awsome update but confused too waiting for story to unfold
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Nick update dear
What happened in geets life?
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CHAPTER 8



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, RELIGIOUS STORIES AND TERMS; MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. I'M NEITHER ENDORSING NOR ENCOURAGING ANY NEGATIVE BEHAVIOUR & CRIME TOWARDS CHILDREN. Its just a "fictional" story for entertainment purposes! PLEASE READ KEEPING IN MIND THAT THIS STORY IS FOR ENTERTAINMENT & DRAMA IS PART OF IT !!!!! If you don't agree with the concept of the story as well as my point of view (POV) of story presentation, kindly DO NOT READ THIS STORY!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY!


After his grandparents left, Maan was about to call Geet when Adi walked in carrying some typed letters and files which Maan needed later in the day. Before Maan could question him, Adi informed, "Sir, these are the letters which you dictated to Gayatri and files required for meetings later in the day. As Gayatri had classes after lunch, she has left for her college."

"But why wasn't I informed?"

"Sir, she came to meet you but you were busy with your family. Will there be anything else sir?"

"No you may leave Adi."



Later in the evening after dinner, Geet had just taken shower and was about to go to bed when she saw, Maan standing in his furious MSK form in her room.



Maan had also come by the same parapet which Geet has used few days back. "Aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain?" (What are you doing here?)



"Mai tumse milne aaya hoon. Tum office mein toh mere se theek se baath nahi karteen, iss liye socha ghar par kar loon." (I've come to meet you. In office you refuse to talk to me so I decided to talk to you at home.)

"Theek hai jo kehna hai jaldi kahiye iss se pehle koi yahaan aa jaaye aur hum dono ke parivaar ki badnaami ho." (Alright tell me what you want to talk about? Leave before anyone finds you in my room and results in embarassment of both our families.)

"Geet mai tumhein apna banna chahta hoon dono parivaaron aur samaaj ke saamne." (Geet I want to make you mine in front of our families and society.)

"Dekhiye, aap samajhne ki koshish kijiye ki yeh ho nahi sakta. Aap apne parivaar ki pasand ki ladki se shaadi kar lijiye." (Listen, what you want cannot happen. Kindly get married to the girl of your family's choice.)

"Tum mujhse dusari shaadi karne ko keh rahi ho? Tumhein maloom aisa karne se mai jail bhi jaa sakta hoon?" (You are asking me to get married second time? Do you know I can get arrested for bigamy?)



"KAUNSI SHAADI? KAISI SHAADI? Woh do bacchon ke beech ek "gudde-gudiya" ka khel thaa jisse naa toh samaaj aur naa hi kanoon maanta hai. Swayam panditji bhi uske liye tyaar nahi the. Abb hum dono mein koi rishta nai hai. Hum kewal do padosi hain."(WHICH MARRIAGE? WHOSE MARRIAGE? That was a child's play which neither the society nor law accepts; even the priest didn't approve off it! Now there is no relationship between us except that we are next door neighbours.)



"RISHTA NAHI HAI? Theek hai toh mai aaj aur abhi rishta bannata hoon." (NO RELATIONSHIP? Then today and right now I'll create a relationship between us.) Maan gathered Geet in his tight embrace


kissing her all over her face.



Geet was initially shocked, then resisted but slowly gave in and then started accepting Maan's kisses as she knew that only Maan has the right to kiss her.



Both were lost in each other that Geet didn't notice when Maan had carried Geet to her bed and had unzipped her kurta.



Suddenly there was a loud knock on the door with Veer's voice calling, "Gudiya, darwazaa kholo hummein tumse ek zaruri baat karni hai." (Gudiya, open the door, I have an important topic to discuss with you.)

Geet pushed Maan with full strength away from her and replied, "Bhai...sa, do minute dijiye mai kap...p...ade badal rahi hoon." (Bhai-sa, give me...two minutes I'm changing...clothes.) By now Maan had got up from the bed and Geet pushed a resisting Maan out of her room to the balcony and whispered, "Abb aap jaayiye!" (Now please leave.) Geet closed the curtain leading to balcony. She closed her kurta's zip, straightened her clothes, wore her dupatta lying on the chair and gave a last look to her appearance and opened the door.

When Geet opened the door, she was surprised to see Veer and Rudra at such a late hour. After few pleasantries were exchanged, Veer came straight to the point. "Gudiya, tere liye rishta aaya hai." (Gudiya, there is a marriage proposal for you.)



Geet was stunned into silence. After sometime Rudra shook her, "Geet batta na teri rai kya hai?" (Geet, tell us what is your opinion?)



"Bhai-sa, agar Nanaji ne baat pakki kar di hai toh..." (Bhai-sa, if Nanaji has fixed the alliance then...)

"Tu chinta matt kar, Gudiya. Jab tak tu "haan" nahi kahegi kuch nahi hoga." (Gudiya, you don't worry! Until you don't agree to the alliance, we will not get the marriage alliance fixed.)

Geet was in two minds what to say? Her heart and soul had already chosen her life partner fourteen years back but family and society will not accept him. How can she marry someone else and destroy a stranger's life when her heart will not accept that relationship. Besides her studies...

"Bhai-sa, abhi toh mai apni padhai poori karna chahti hoon aur naukari karna chahti hoon. Agar ladkewale paanch (5) saal intezaar karne ko tyaar hain toh..." (Bhai-sa, I'm still studying and after finishing my studies, I want to work. If the bridegroom's family is willing to wait for 5yrs. then...)

Maan was about to leave, stopped hearing, "Gudiya, tere liye rishta aaya hai." (Gudiya, there is a marriage proposal for you.)



The moment Maan heard about marriage proposal for His Mishty, Maan's temper started rising but his brain said to wait and hear the whole conversation and so he did! After hearing the conversation, Maan knew that he doesn't have much time to make Geet his, before his Mishty's marriage is fixed with someone. Hence Maan left for his room, thinking about what to do next. Maan's heart wanted to make Geet his as soon as possible but his brain said to wait as he has to takeover the job of MD Khurana Constructions (which will consume all his personal time) as well as clear up the office of some nefarious activities. As few hours back he got information and proofs of what he suspected as soon as he and Aditya had inspected Khurana Construction (KC)'s Financial records. Now he was 100% sure of what's going on in KC behind his father and grandfathers' back. Although it was too late in the day, but he decided to take his elders i.e. Thakur Harshvardhan Singh and Ram's advice on how to proceed next?



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CHAPTER 9



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, RELIGIOUS STORIES AND TERMS; MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. I'M NEITHER ENDORSING NOR ENCOURAGING ANY NEGATIVE BEHAVIOUR & CRIME TOWARDS CHILDREN. Its just a "fictional" story for entertainment purposes! PLEASE READ KEEPING IN MIND THAT THIS STORY IS FOR ENTERTAINMENT & DRAMA IS PART OF IT !!!!! If you don't agree with the concept of the story as well as my point of view (POV) of story presentation, kindly DO NOT READ THIS STORY!

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NEXT DAY

Location: Breakfast table, Khurana Mansion, 7:45a.m.



Thakur Harvardhan Singh and Savitri Devi sat for breakfast bursting with happiness. Thakur Harvardhan's happiness was effecting everyone and finally Ram asked his father, "Bauji, aapki khushi ka kaaran?" (Bauji, how come you are so happy?)



"Savitri aur maine Maan ke rishte ki ek jageh baat chalayi hai." (Savitri and I have sent a marriage proposal for Maan.)



"KYA?" (WHAT?) Maan thundered raising his voice first time in front of his family.



"Maan tum theek toh ho?" (Maan are you alright?) Vaidehi came near him and rubbed his back making Maan realise where he was.

"Ladki kaun hai?" (Who is the girl?) Ram asked on Vaidehi's nudging him.

"Ladki ka parivaar humari hi hasiyat ka hain. Ladki bahut hi sanskaari (values), maryada poorn (mode of conduct & etiquette)evam shastron ka bhi gyaan (knowledge of scriptures) rakhti hai. Ladki abhi padh rahi hai, iss liye shaadi thode saalon baad hogi. Sabse adhik mehitapoorn ladki ek 'brahamin kanya' hai." (Girl's family is of same financial status as us. The girl has good values; knowledge of scriptures and knows correct etiquette. Currently she is studying, hence their marriage will be after sometime. But most importantly she is a daughter of a brahamin family.)

"Maa, mere nashta ho gaya. Meri subah sade aath (08:30) baje meeting hai toh mai chalta hoon." (My breakfast is done. I've a 08:30a.m. meeting, so I have to leave.) Maan said unable to sit and listen to Thakur Harvardhan's happiness on Maan's prospective proposal.

Once, Maan had left, Vaidehi hesitantly asked Savitri Devi, "Maa ladki ka naam kya hai? Kya hum uske parivaar se milen hain?" (Maa, what is the girl's name? Have we ever met her family before?)



"Arre haan bahu. Tum usse har roz milti ho aur tum toh usse apni beti bulati ho." (Oh yes Vaidehi. You meet her everyday and you address her as your daughter.) Thakur Harvardhan replied excitedly.

"Matlab?" (Meaning?)

"Ram aur Vaidehi, woh Thakur Vidyasagar ki naatin, Geetali hai." (Ram and Vaidehi, she is Thakur Vidyasagar's grand daughter, Geetali.) Thakur Harvardhan said with pride and happiness.

At once the atmosphere became jubiliant. Savitri Devi and Vaidehi hugged each other with tears of joy overflowing from their eyes.
"Magar Bauji, Thakur sahaab maane kaise?" (But Bauji, how did Thakur Vidyasagar agree for the proposal?)

"Beta mai toh Maan aur Geetali ki shaadi tabse karana chahta thaa jabse maine Geetali ko pehli baar dekha thaa magar Thakur sahaab ke dhaarmik aur samajik vichaar sunn kar chupp thaa. Aur uske baad Dev ka kaand ho gaya. Magar kal jab maine Geetali ko Khurana Constructions ke office mein badhe vivek, saiyam aur karye parayanta dekhi toh mai samjh gaya ki hummein Geetali se behtar koi bhi ladki Maan ke liye nahi milegi." (Ram, I always wanted to make Geetali, Maan's bride since I saw her. But after hearing Thakur Vidyasagar's religious and social views I held myself back. But yesterday when I saw Geetali working with patience, calmness, sobriety, efficiency and professionalism in Khurana Constructions' office, I knew at once that there can be no other girl as a better life partner for Maan than Geetali.)

"Magar phir bhi Thakur sahaab maane kaise?" (But still how did Thakur Vidyasagar agree for the proposal?)

"Savitri aur mai kal Thakur sahaab ke paas rishta le kar gaye. Isse pehle Thakur sahaab kuch kehte, Rajveer ne kaha ki usse yeh rishta manzoor hai agar Maan aur Geetali ek dusare ko pasand karte hone toh. Aaj subah Rajveer ka phone aaya aur usne kaha hai ki Geetali pehle apni padhai poori karna chahti hai aur usse ke baad kuch din naukari karna chahti hai. Rajveer ka ek aur sujhaav thaa ki hum Geetali ko uske "dulhe" kaa naam naa bataayen aur Maan ko uski "dulhan" ka. Mai bhi Rajveer ki baat se sehmat hoon. Mai yeh bhi jaanta hoon ki woh dono ek dusare se prem karte hain, magar apni bhaavnaiyen vyakat karne mein hichkicha rahe hain. Iss liye hummein ek parivaar ke roop mein unse unki bhaavanaein vyakat karaani hai. Aur iss kaam mein yeh naalayak (looking at Vicky) bahut kaam aayega." (Yesterday evening Savitri and I went to Thakur Vidyasagar with Maan's proposal to ask for Geetali's hand in marriage. But before Thakur Vidyasagar could say anything, Rajveer said that he is agreeable for this marital alliance only if Maan and Geetali like one other. Today morning Rajveer called and said that Geetali is only agreeable for this marriage if bridegroom's family is willing to wait till Geetali finishes her studies and works for sometime. Rajveer also suggested that they will not tell Geetali her "bridegroom's" name. Whereas we should not tell Maan his "bride's" name. I also agree with Rajveer on this. I'm also aware that Maan and Geetali love one another but are hesitant to reveal their feelings to one another. Hence, we as a family have to make them realise their feelings for one another and express them. For this work, this incompetant Vicky (looking at Vicky) will help us great deal.)

"Kya Daarji? Madatt bhi mere se maang rahe hain aur naalayak bhi mujhe bol rahe hain." (What is this Daarji? You want me to help you as well as you are calling me 'incompetant'.)

"Aaj se Vicky ko koi "naalayak"nahi bolega. Naa aap, Thakur sahaab aur naa hi tum, Ram." (From today no one will call Vicky "incompetant", neither Thakur Harvardhan you nor Ram, you.) Savitri Devi said rubbing Vicky's back and hugging him.

Meanwhile in KC, as expected Geet was extremely cool, professional and aloof with Maan. Today, Geet was to give her first presentation in front of Maan and the KC's Architectural team.



While Geet was presenting, unconsciously Geet's hand holding the marker went towards her mouth




drawing Maan's attention towards her lips. Maan was getting restless remembering Geet's warm, soft, supple and juicy lips whose juice Maan had sucked not long back, and was craving for more.



Feeling Maan's intense gaze on her, Geet realised her folly and quickly removed her hand from her mouth.



Rest of the presentation happened without any snag.

Meanwhile both Maan and Geet's reaction i.e. Maan's reaction when Geet's name was mentioned and vice versa were being closely observed by the respective families. Days passed like this with both Maan and Geet being professional, while both families kept hawk like sight on both Maan and Geet. Soon it was time for Maan to take over formally as "Managing Director (MD) of Khurana Constructions".




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Posted: 6 years ago
So now what he will marry her without elders permission and without realising that their elders have fixed their wedding???

I want to see the changes in geet. I want her to realise and understand none of it was her fault
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Chapters 6 n 7
Awesome, lovely n wonderful updates
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Sorry for commenting late
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Chapters 8 n 9
Amazing, lovely n superb updates beautifully written

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