MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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Aatiya

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Happy new year... i have been busy too... meanwhile i had my second child delivered.

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Rph09

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Read it in one go. Loved it. Wondering what happened in their past! There r so many couples who have face this kind of phase. It's not easy to go away from the love of ur life.

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Thanks for the note

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#254

Take your own time dear

Will wait for update...

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#255

In wait for Chapter 5

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#256

Hi, kawaii. I hope you're having a nice Monday. I still have to read the recent two chapters.

But I was reading something and suddenly this story came to me.

The girl asks the boy, "Do you think it's possible? Can people be in love and still be unhappy?'

'Yes,' he says,'It's possible. To be in love and still be unhappy.'

Perhaps that what became of their union. They loved each other but their marriage was no more a happy one.

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janu2006

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Posted: 6 years ago

#257

gr8 parts

cont.soon

thanks for pm

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#258

Hello kawaii geet, just got around reading the second chapter. It was undoubtedly beautifully written.

I remember commenting on the first chapter but now that I read that comment it looks too nonchalant and pretentious to myself only. The kind of know-it-all comment you'd pass on your neighbor, or a 3rd person whose struggles you're not privy to. Then, you flip the pages of their life, skip the surface, take down your shoes and start climbing deeper. The detached facade begins crumbling. You cannot help but get involved. It's no more easier to pass judgments, advises, counseling. You are in their shoes, the shoes are hurting, you want to fix the shoe, but now that you're inside you know it's not so easy, the pain is unbearable and you're glad that the shoes are borrowed. You return the shoes but now that you've lived through the pain you're more humble, more understanding. This might just be another rambling unknown to me, but the piece moved me very much.

The way you've used motifs like the platinum band and her being his sun and then when the sun sets from his land to rise in another one, the darkness that fills both of them. Then the white clouds. You begin with it and end at it. There's an onslaught of memories on both the sides. Like the white clouds memories float in and out.

An update that is just like the piece Nuvole Bianche, itself. Calm but roaring with emotions. Happiness and sadness both combined in one. A kind of work that tumbles you down the road of deep introspection. The kind of work that wants to make you google about author and dig out all her works in order to know her and her thoughts better.😊

Have you read an author and wondered what kind of books she must read? That's how I felt.

Thank you.

Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago