Predestined~Repost~UPDATED Ch19@Pg40[CH18@Pg33]4th June 2019

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 6 years ago

#151

geet's presence in life affecting maan very strongly which maan is not liking

maan wants to push geet from his life

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#152

Chapter 15

Part 2

terrific update! awesomely written!

Maan's inner thoughts well portrayed! at least he acknowledged that Geet is special!

can understand Maan's feelings! he is affected by Geet!

nice that Maan is imaging Geet!!

his frustration is reasonable!

so Maan cannot concentrate at work!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 6 years ago

#153

Chapter 15

Part 2

impressive update! perfectly written!

as expected Maan does not listen to SD! adore Geet;s cribbing to her babaji! omg she thought it was not really there!

loved when Geet agreed with Maan that he should watch her clothes!

hmm wonder what else Geet has planned for Maan? of cos Maan is angry!

Maan is trying to avoid Geet but alas destiny has other plans! everything abiut her just attracts him.

Maan cannot help but stare at a wet Geet!

update soon

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#154

read all over again all those parts...only 1 day passed, they r in mumbai n both r gone case...first geet day dreamt romantic stuff n now maan...geet is nt remembering dev...who is sameera...ahlam, maan ki upar fida...maan is a cyber genious...lets c how geet examine if maan is gay or not...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 6 years ago

#155

Chapter 15 Part 2

Maan comes home earlier then usual and Geet was asleep

opening the door and Maan is welcomed by his cute wife

there is no doubt that he already cares for her

placing her on the bed as he thought she has fallen asleep

Geet was so cute talking to her Babaji and then realizes that she is not dreaming

her husband is actually at home

Maan knows that its difficult for Geet to wash her clothes especially now with her

injured hands still he makes sure to point out her chores has not been done

but also been sarcastic letting her know that she don't know much about household

chores but it was good seeing a strong Geet standing up to Maan

the darkness once again brings in concern and surely Maan is captured by his wife's beautiful form no matter how much he tries but it seems even nature does not want Maan forgetting his wife's images