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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
Introduction and Character Sketch is so Captivating
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
Prologue

I totally enjoyed it
Both Maan and Geet want to be with their friends partying
instead of a boring business party
Armaan , Maan's elder brother seem to have a fabulous bond with Maan
while Geet and her dad has one
I'm really looking forward to reading this story
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you Kwaish for the PM😊
N Thank you Radha for a new storyin GF

I like the sound of Maan who believes in spending time with loved ones rather than stranger
Love is over-rated 😆, I kinda agree esp these days when everyone equates love to the smallest of things i..e i love your shoes and i myself am guilty lol. So i doubt i'd know what true love is even it hit me in the face, because i fall in love with like everything form tops, to jeans, to jewellery and boots are my weakness😆 along with music, i'm totally in love with Alec Benjamin's Let me down slolwy and Rita Ora's Let you love me lol, so yeah love is over-rated or mayve under-rated lol

Awww Geet dreams about falling in love, how cute lol, poor girl would meet Maan who obviously travels the other way lol

I really like the sound of both the family




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Poor Geet, i hate when my plan breaks last minute so i so get Geets frustation. Sujata sounds like those real dead strict and all. But then again one need to be the commanding and disciplinarian lol
But i love her father, i loved that plan lol. the middle route is so so so good lol, but with the likes of me (stubborn cow) even that isn't fesible lol

Maan left his own birthday party? Whats with that?
Aww poor dad but i really like Armaan and Maan, i thought he was kinda responsible lol but i reckon i should have figured him out in the naughty line lol. So Geet and Him are very similar, kind of?
Ok his point is also valid, rather with near and dear ones! hmm but if you don't meet new people then how can you really expand, i believe every person you meet helps to grow you as a character. i am me because i learnt something form everyone i met in my life, either influenced do change or not to change lol. But more importantly how would Maan and Geet meet lol

The 1 hr curfew lol on both sides
Both their parents know them quite well, i wonder if Maan and Geet will meet at the back door

Thank you once again for the new story and thank you Kwaish
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Interesting character sketch and prolougue looking forward to the story...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on the new story😃
From all the other FF's I have read,I find Maan's char is different and I like It!
Loved how the Handa daughters are pampered by their father..haha same thing happens in my home!Papa is very sweet and Mumma is little strict to us😆
And loved Armaan-Maan's bro bonding😊
The difference in the characters is very much interesting!!
Would love to read Maaneet ki meeting😉
Absolutely loved the concept and update!
Plzz continue soon😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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will you only be updating on the weekend?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone for reading the story and commenting on it. It means a lot to me.

@khwaishfan, Yeah. That's the plan right now. But if something changes, then I will let you know 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
thanks Preet!! shall wait till the weekend!!! 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
A beautiful start dearie:):):) I loved the way you wrote the characters and prologue:):):) Its a very interesting mix of characters and am excited to see how they will become intertwined in a relation...Especially Maaneet...Excited to read the story to see the plot and characters shape up...Congratulations on the story and am looking forward to reading your creation:):):)

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