Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Wish You a Very Happy New Year, Sophie !! 😃

Part 12

Sameera's "I think I am in love" How many times she would have said it before..😆 Her antics are adorable.

the morning moment was beautiful, that there was a feeling of belonging to someone..of feeling content and happy..liking the way gradually they have started feeling for each other..I would not say it is only for the baby..it is playing major part definitely, but it is not the only reason there, it has acted more like trigger.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Happy New Year Sophie!!! 😊

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priyasree

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Waiting for update ...

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Please do try and update for the month of January

will appreciate it much

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 6 years ago

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I like how Maan is opening up and Geet is unsure but positive.

I like Sam and Adi. Maybe they will be great together.

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099" size="3">Please do try and update for the month of January</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">will appreciate it much</font>

I would try but unfortunately my laptop has gone in for maintenance, i really don't know when the technician would give it back although he did say sometime this week

So I am afraid you have to wait for a little, maybe come back with an update mid month or end of the month

Sorry guys

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Sperm donation, this is such a novel concept. There are still so many good writers and stories in the forum and here I was thinking that the forum has lost its charm.

That was a fine start with Geet feeling dizzy and settling in his couch in his apartment while very conveniently pulling the rug from under his feet. Mayhap, she needed the rug to rest her feet on.

These two, Aditya and Maan reminded me of the very first episode of Big Bang Theory, where Sheldon and his friend go to donate sperm but change their minds at the last moment.

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

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First things first. How long have you been writing? Because this is so well written. Just like professionals.

Now, as for the second chapter, I am really pleased with the way you've penned Maan's character. I realize it istoo early to call the shots however, he was gentle, understanding and dealt with things like an adult. I also like the fact that he's so tuned with all her gesticulations even though it's the first meeting only. The strain in her voice or her tear stained eyes, people don't really pay attention.

He's not available. That's bad news. She wants him to be a father to her child. Their child. Complicated. Let's see how it turns out. There's this line you've used about a child holding onto her mother's hand. And her smile is like a beacon in the midst of greying clouds.

It made me think, Is Geet in some sort of trouble? And she needs to hold onto Maan's hand. Will he be her beacon in the midst of grey clouds?

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 6 years ago

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@ Nohar - thank you so much for the compliment, it's always a pleasure to find new readers and even more so when they are so kind. Professional writer wow I'll not let that get to my head lol

I've been writing for a while, my earlier works are filled with mistakes- all kind of mistakes lol. So this product is actually the work of many years lol, I think I officially started writing in 2015. Blimey that's like 4 years in a few weeks, ouch that's a hitch to my never aging persona lol

Thank you so much and welcome, I hope you enjoy this tale

And I look foward to our interactions

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Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Twenty1st
@ Nohar - thank you so much for the compliment, it's always a pleasure to find new readers and even more so when they are so kind. Professional writer wow I'll not let that get to my head lol

I've been writing for a while, my earlier works are filled with mistakes- all kind of mistakes lol. So this product is actually the work of many years lol, I think I officially started writing in 2015. Blimey that's like 4 years in a few weeks, ouch that's a hitch to my never aging persona lol

Thank you so much and welcome, I hope you enjoy this tale

And I look foward to our interactions

You responded, that too so soon. I didn't think you'd. 4 years, wow, that is some dedication. I hope that you keep writing for many more years because you're a good storyteller and a writer. I was just checking your index and I realized you've written on so many versatile concepts. Me too looking forward to reading all of them and the interaction too. Good luck.

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