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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#201

wow!!! you are ona writing spree. i wasn't expecting an update so soon but am not compalining...glad to see the couple trying to work things out...ab chance diya hai to chance pe dance bhi banta hai...geet ka maan ka mazak udaane ka aur maan ka geet par lattu hone ka...where will sasha fit in? hmmm i wonder...naukri to pakki hai chokri bhi pakki ho jayegi after ups and downs and learning along the way

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Chapter 9

thanks 4 da pm.

Perfect chapter! wonderfully written!

Loved Geet's outfit! admire that she wants to be independent!

Liked Geet's reaction seeing KC building!

Geet introduced herself as Geet Vihaan! she must have a reason for this!

Adi and Viren are very nice! glad that the interview went well! I am surprised that Maan conducts the test in his office but can understand why! Geet did not expect it! does Maan's staff know that he is married?

great seeing Maan noticing every nuance of his wife!

amazed that Maan asked Geet out for lunch! curious about what he wants to talk about!

Admire Maan's work ethic! Seems like Sasha likes Maan!

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#203

Beautiful story. Good they r going to go Give chance to develop their marriage

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Chapter 9

amazing update! superbly written!

glad Maan made the suggestion! its high time that they talk!

as expected Maan asked her why she lied to Adi about her name! Loved Geet's reply! at least he has noticed that Geet has adapted well with his family!

great that Maan gave her an opportunity to ask him anything! really wanted her to ask what is on her mind!

nice that Maan made it easier by asking why she agreed to marry him! at least Geet was honest!

Geet's dilemma well portrayed!

finally Geet breaks down! liked that Maan consoles her!

this confrontation was much needed! happy that Geet bared her heart! she has been patient and its not easy! how can Maan assume she wants a divorce? she wants him and his support as she is his wife!

sad that Maan just walked out! Geet upset!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#205

Chapter 10

Tremendous update! excellently written!

Thank God Maan came back! can understand that he needed time but he could of told that to Geet! love his care for Geet!

great that Maan wants to give their marriage a chance! why does he feel she deserves better? why would she not want him? why can't he love her?

does Maan have a past? hope he confides in Geet!

can understand that Geet is relieved! happy for Maaneet!

Its their new beginning!

Dadi was worried but happy that Maaneet are together! nice seeing the changes in their relationship!

Liked that Maan will give the marriage his best!

Adore Maan and Dadi's bond! she is ecstatic that Maaneet are giving their marriage a chance! all she wants is to see them happy and settled!

Loved Maan's efforts to make dadi smile!

looking forward to the next updates!

sorry for late likes and comments!

appreciate the triple updates!

thanks for the pm!

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Geet confess she wants hr husband ans after thinking on this Maan also decide to give chance to their relation Daadi is more than happy after knowing what hr grandson decision

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Nice updates dear Geet told what she is thinking and what she want from Mann listening it mann is shocked and goes out to think about her words after some time came back and told her that he will truly work on there relationship a chance
Daddimaa is happy listening what mann told that he is ready to give chance

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lethasanthosh

@lethasanthosh

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#208

It is good that u gave continuous updates. Otherwise too much assumptions I should have made. Any way nice updates. I never thought that within 2 updates u will progress their relationship this much.like the think that both Maan & Geet are going to give a chance to their relationship. Waiting for next update for some light moments of Maaneei.

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#209

hello !!
nice concept ...I love the concept of arrange marriage ..
dadi tricked maan to get marry
maaneet's first meeting was interesting ...both don't like each other ..I love the names they have given to each other :p
dadima is very smart ..after maan agreed to get married she didn't waste much time and get him married fatafat ...kya pata agar janab ka mood change ho jaye firse toh ?
finally geet because mrs.maan khurana