Decoding the Enigma#T3!* - Page 22

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

Yeah possible that I might have felt more from Maan's side this time. Don't worry about the update, it was wonderful.

Its a result of my ever changing loyalties.. they keep changing from Maan to Geet and then back to Maan with every update 😉

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

You're giving me these tiny tiny previews already making me more desparate for more of the story😕

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 28

Part 1

Lovely pic! nice title...

glad Geet answered the call! can understand Maan's tension as well as Geet's anger!

liked that Maan knows her so well! will she ever understand him?

Maan is so restless and wants to see her! Gosh she is so stubborn! Maan had choice but to go to meet her!

Can imagine Maan's feelings! did not like that Geet was not there when he went there! she indeed tests his patience!

Thank God he saw her!

Loved how you described their relationship! wow Maan prepared to fight against fate for Geet!

great that he is ready to confess his feelings!

oh no Geet the Ferris wheel stopped! Maan is relieved that its started!

he is anxious to see her!

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 2

Part 2

fascinating gif😃👏⭐️

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 28

Part 2

you have portrayed Maan's eagerness to see her so beautifully!

Hated that Geet was so rude! what is she up to?? how can she just put her life in danger! Maan is dying every second!

he is ready to accept any punishment!

nice she was able to tell Maan how she feels with his behavior! she is upset Maan is going to the hostel! Maan pleads to Geet to forgive him!

she has a right to be angry but she is wrong to ignore him!

omg Maan called Geet jaan!

sad that Geet doubts Maan! I do not like seeing Maan break down!

Loved Maan's heart felt earnest confession!

why was so hard for Geet to see her was honest?

at last Maan was able to stop her from moving! glad seeing this dominant determined Maan!

she did stop him from leaving!

Intense passionate hug!! Thank God they are safe!

finally they are together! not surprised when he weeps her tears!

Glad that you liked how I narrated Maan's feelings..

I would have updated this one from a first person perspective but I had already written this so changing that into first person would have consumed lot of time...But you would read the first person version soon!!!

It was not hard for her to see his honesty...She just wanted something solid...

She didn't want to be temporarily pacified by him...

Yes Maan is determined but still with the flavor of his innocence!!

The hug - Hehehe..Next one is more intense!! 😉

Thank you so much for your lovely comment...and patience!! 🤗