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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Now the pm limit is 20

Really I didn't check 🤔🤔🤔

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Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Now the pm limit is 20

Cant we request to make it atleast 50. And unlimited for writers would be great too

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They are just hopeless

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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Really I didn't check 🤔🤔🤔

Haan yaar..Isike chakkar mein woh 500 wala gadbad huwi naa..I told you na they are working on pms
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PM issue like using direct pm option and sending multiple pm is working Nil...You should try to update and at least go for a test pm
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Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Haan yaar..Isike chakkar mein woh 500 wala gadbad huwi naa..I told you na they are working on pms

For 2 days !!!!

Too much

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Posted: 6 years ago

update Part 41 soon! thanks

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Haan yaar, update karne ka mujhe time hi nahi mil raha. My nanu is going through health problems. Doctor has said he just has 3-6 months left. so everything is depressing right now...but I will try to update

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Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Haan yaar, update karne ka mujhe time hi nahi mil raha. My nanu is going through health problems. Doctor has said he just has 3-6 months left. so everything is depressing right now...but I will try to update

Allah sad to hear it .... take your time...

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Part 41

M-Where are you going?

He asks not starting the bike

G-Embassy

He nods then starts the bike

G-Mujhe bass auto stand tak chod dena

He drives quickly and drops her off at the embassy

Geet utar jaati hai

Says bye and all

Phone booth se dopahar mein Geet pni maa se bhi 1 min baat karti h

Kehti hai ki, don’t worry I am fine

Geet’s mom- Beta tu kahan hai? Ghar aaja

G-I am happier here. Don’t worry

Phone kaat diya

Ab shaam ko Maan comes back

He hands her an envelope

G-What’s this?

M-Open it

She opens it

It’s an interview schedule letter for the manager’s post in a Luxury resort hotel in Africa

She looks at him

Holds his wrist and puts the letter on his palm

G-Thanks...but no thanks

M- You should give the interview at least or are you just a chicken?

G-I have got a job

M-Really? Where?

G-A very nice place

M-Where?

G-emm…someplace...well...I don’t want to divulge the name

M-I am your friend, surely you trust me to keep a secret...

G-Well...I wish to keep it to myself

M-What’s such a big deal with it? I can’t follow you to find out, you know.... and the more you say no…the more curious i am becoming…so maybe I’ll really follow you and find out

G- Yeah....right

She rolls her eyes

He shrugs

G-By the way...I have something to show you

M-What?

G-Tickets.I bought the tickets too

Maan takes a look at the tickets and checks the date time and place

She smiles but her eyes have a tinge of sadness

He hands her back her tickets

M- So you are going day after tomorrow. Maine tumse request kit hi rukne ki…but it seems…you have to go

She takes a deep breath

G- I have to go

She knows,wo ruk gai toh nahi jaa payegi...

M- So…you sure you are not gonna tell me where you'll be staying? What you’ll be doing when you go there?

She shrugs

G-I don’t thinks so…sorry

M- Nah it’s ok...I’ll have you followed just to make sure you're ok

G-What??

She cant help frown yet smile

M-What “what”?

G-I will be ok. I am not a kid

M- Did I say you were? But it’s all the secrecy that’s got me intrigued. It’s like telling a kid not to go into the room at the end of the hall or to not open the book in his hands. Its reverse psychology

G- Those think about all this too much. Forget about it, may be some things and some memories are better erased. I am one of them

M-I haveo nly had nice memories with you. Why would I want to erase them? Now, you want to forget me, ok I get it. Clean break fresh start. Makes sense…yeah

G-Maan...[she keeps her hand on his]..its not like that…you are such a nice man..such a caring person and so kind too but...its like...maybe i want to start afresh

M- I am not that nice. You don’t know the real me, Geet

G-Hmm…mayb eI don’t....and maybe I won’t ever get a chance then

He nods stoically with a thinking expression on his face

G-Chalo....dinner? Parso jaana hai, bohot saari packing bhi karni hai

M-Yeah sure why not. You need help with anything?

Geet heads towards the kitchen

G-No I will be fine...thanks for asking

She lays the dinner

M- You wanna go out on picnic tomorrow? I can take a day off

G-umm..I'll think about it…but...I guess no...I hate flying and would wanna take some rest before flying

M-ok fine

G-I don’ twanna over exhaust myself. I hope you understand

M-Then don’t go flying

G-Huh?

M-You are afraid to fly then don’t go. Don't cancel picnic for it

Maan says rolling his eyes, as if his logic makes perfect sense

She shake sher head...not getting his weird logic

G-waise tum bhi to parso ghar jaa rahe ho, ghar walon ke liye kuch leke nahi jaoge?

M-Oh I got it all packed and ready

G-oh...dikhaya bhi nahi. Kya le jaa rahe ho?

M- I don’t think I can tell you.

G- Huh? Aisa kya hai?

M-Nope I can’t tell you

She shrugs

G-ok

M-Well it’ ssomething really special you know, one of those custom made things...but then I’ll tell you then you'll think I am such a sweet guy! And then it'll be all the more harder for you to get over me

Maan says getting up from the table

M-I am done for tonight. I have loads of work to do. See you in the morning. Good night honey

Keh kar chala gaya

Geet baithi thi

G-Maan

M- Hmm?

He stops midway to his room

G-emm....mujhe darr lagta hai

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