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Geet is to dramatic

Read both parts, u try to make this story as humorous as u can I can say it is okay, not very humrous where u can't stop laughing, some what humrous, but still nice effort, I understand plot as per my assumption Shona must be Maan's friend came for wedding shoopsho from overseas and taking help of Maan but why maan hide from her is questions but any way ab sub comic character ikhathae huae hai to Rhoda Maja bhi aayega a?story Ka kya jab task would Aapke entertain na kare?

its time to wrap up things

Dear some people only know to hurt others. Plz ignore them

Dear I always say
Ignored them whom don't
Respect u and ur work
It easy to comnt on. Other. Work
When it come to those people. Who hurt u
They can't write a single line
Which can make any sense
So don't think about these type of people
Thu only know how to hurt other feelings
And criticize on other
So just ignored them

dear

Don't be upset dear. See you go without listening to dumb idiots. They are brainless people who don't possess any skills. Only thing they can do is to discourage talented folks. Please ignore them and begin everything afresh. I know you will need the advice of your friends. Love your writings very much. Please start this lovely story again dear.

It really hurts to see the message and what ur going

Hey don't do that I always love your and been waiting for your updates. Please keep on writing. Find that good thing in your writing to motivate yourself but don't stop writing because of someone..