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alina_ali

@alina_ali

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

The concept is really nice...looking forward to read more of their journey together..

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Congrats on another story. Interesting prologue. Life is unpredictable and that is what Geet is facing now. looking forward to read.

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vrsharma

@vrsharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Congrats for the new story

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Wonderful start.

Maan & Geet married 😲.

Maan is Geet's sister's husband too.

How did Geet's sister die?

Many questions developing in my mind. Can't wait to read more.

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Sad beginning but I see where they both are coming from but both have come from. Already so awkward and distant dont know how this is going to work out.

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priyarthiroy75

@priyarthiroy75

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Will love to read.sent u buddy request pls accept.

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no name

@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

I would say may be its normal concept but thank you for writing on this ( was missing something like this )
and you writing this its cherry on top so definitely it will be beautiful

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Great beginning.

Geet's dreams and hopes and how they are now so far away was described well.

I am glad there is no animosity between Geet and Maan but of course there is a lot of awkwardness.

How do either of them cope in this kind of situation? How does Geet accept her new life, her new roles???

And Maan seeing his deceased wife's traits in Geet makes sense but how to overcome that and see only Geet?

I seriously thought you would kill off both Geet's sister and brother-in-law and Maan would be like her BIL's brother!!! Wow, I was wrong.

Last note, I am actually glad that Geet was uncomfortable with the baby. It's one thing to play with a child and another to be the one raising it. At least you did not show Geet as a "perfect" mom substitute.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

really like her character like you shown a little
she clearly not happy nor Maan
I'm looking forward to read it thank you for starting this

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

just noticed your banner ...
got everything but I'm stuck to betrayel...is it Because his wife dead leaving him n their daughter alone or something else
but liked the last falling in love