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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 7 years ago

#801

Yeah, I so wanted to know what geet thought about them being together

But I also wanted to know what will happen tomorrow!!!???

Just can't wait anymore pls pls update next too soon.😛

Edited by Sundari. - 7 years ago

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#802

beautiful update

full with geet's feelings

u wrote it awesomely

geet being confused with her own feelings n having strange pull for maan n still not remembering single thing about him

the way u write about geet inner feelings ... its just perfect giving very clear view about her inner heart feelings n her mind say

finally geet ready to accept her new life...

love it very much

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@Pqwert207

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Posted: 7 years ago

#803

This update was indeed worth the waiting

Loved how you conveyed geets feelings

I hope she will accept everything now

Now wat is going to be the new twist?

Thanks for update

Loved d update

Eagerly waiting for next one

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yashvi agarwal

@yashviagarwal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#804

Nice part

I wonder how come get agreed n how will things be for them now..hope so it goes good

Geets attitude towards maan changes

Hope she is not upto anything now

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#805

The update was soo dreamy... With Geet inner feeling depicting so well... She is in love with her new found feelings...

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#806

Lovely update..

Waiting for next update ..

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#807

And???...Oh dear thats it...not fair muski..I seeing a happy ending here

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change12

@change12

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#808

awesome update so at last maan was able to make geet fall for him...hope there are no more complications in between them.

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#809

Hi musjkan di,

its always a pleasure to read your stories ...this is another gem of yours and its a complete delight

ive been reading this story for quite some time but always from my mobile and never got to commetn now finally i have managed to sit to comment but it seems every praise will be less than what you deserve ..

but chalo ill try ..

what i loved ...is the the character development of the story ..the way you have shown maan from a heart broken guy to this determined one ..willing to hang on and wait for his love to find her way back to him ..

the different shades of geet ...the way she is with her family ..with his family ...with Him ..her love that determination ...her faith in him and they way you penned each emotion ..it literally touches the heart ..

geet is right to be apprehensive ...but i hope anyone of those doesn't say anything stupid to hurt the other one

waiting for next ...

thanks for this lovely update

sobia

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 7 years ago