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Posted: 7 years ago
such a strange concept
jaan k badle me apna maan girvi rakhdiya!

and jaha pysa aur power hi sab kuch ho waha insaniyat ki umeed hi nahi karni chahiye

anyway..
i guess there is more to the flashback
q ki if bound to the slavery since childhood then how did he finish his education let alone become a business tycoon?

and then comes his relation with his master
its hard to imagine Maan being a submissive one😆

but ke bhi acha hai a different perspective

dadi's helplessness and love for maan bhi thek hi tha

the thing jo mujhe khatka wo Geet hai!
i absolutely hate such character and she is one reason i have decided to not read this ff further

if u are thinking its coz i cant take gray shades tho u r wrong

since she is the lead the transformation which her character would under go is going to be predictable and boring

she would be the one reason this whole story would take the regular ffs route

Trust me sweets i'm done with reading the regular Maaneet romance..😆
unless this story has something different to offer... keep me out of it😛


Do keep writing!

p.s: lo kardiya comment😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

nice update ..
first glimpse of maan's life as a gulam..
I m already scared for maan...it seems like geet is more creative in giving punishment than her father ... seriously writing on forehead with a waterproof mascara ? it's so embarrassing for maan Singh khurana ..
I wonder when will they know who is the actual maan what will they do ?
thanks for the pm dear .. waiting for next..


They already know who is he and what he do
They only don't know how he behaves in real world

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

humne socha the geet alag hagi...magar yahan tho kuch aur hi hai...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon...


Sabkuch Ulta pulta hoga
Not a typical love story
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

this mohinder was treating maan too bad

if not less geet isnt much behind
how can they both treat a human like that
its height
maan isnt thier worker he excelled in his feild still they both treat him like nothing
sad part
thanks for om sorry for being late


But he's their slave
You'll get to know more in future updates
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update...omg Maan was punished by Mohinder for coming late with severe punishment as tighten the grip of noose around his neck... oh no his rano maa died after the birth of her child who was called as choti malkeen geet...he was frightened for her torture more than his malik... interested but feared also to know geet's torture for maan...excited for next...thanks for pm..!!


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AYAZU12

fabulous update dear...
I really can't see maan bearing such nonsense from handas when I have always seen him as a strong person...mohinder handa punished him for getting late and geet ne to had hi kar di I just hated her behaviour with maan how can she be so much rude and arrogant and why is maan bearing all this when he has money and power and can easily come out of this...continue soon dear thnx for the pm...


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

mohinder is really evil he is treating maan lika servant wy he is like that does he have a heart
n dadi is guilty feel responsible fr maan condition
n maan seems to be love geet
geet also seems to be like her dad strict waiting she will feell fr maan
afer feeling fr maan wil she free maan from this master slave realtion ship???


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

such a strange concept
jaan k badle me apna maan girvi rakhdiya!

and jaha pysa aur power hi sab kuch ho waha insaniyat ki umeed hi nahi karni chahiye

anyway..
i guess there is more to the flashback
q ki if bound to the slavery since childhood then how did he finish his education let alone become a business tycoon?

and then comes his relation with his master
its hard to imagine Maan being a submissive one😆

but ke bhi acha hai a different perspective

dadi's helplessness and love for maan bhi thek hi tha

the thing jo mujhe khatka wo Geet hai!
i absolutely hate such character and she is one reason i have decided to not read this ff further

if u are thinking its coz i cant take gray shades tho u r wrong

since she is the lead the transformation which her character would under go is going to be predictable and boring

she would be the one reason this whole story would take the regular ffs route

Trust me sweets i'm done with reading the regular Maaneet romance..😆
unless this story has something different to offer... keep me out of it😛


Do keep writing!

p.s: lo kardiya comment😆


Yeah many were asking me what was the need
Jo maan ko gullam banaya
Power ...ab wo kisi bade ko toh nhi bna Sakta tha
Bacha ek Jo kachi miti hai use usne aise hi mould kar diya jaisa wo Chahta tha

No it's not going to be a typical love story

But still I want to know your perspective on regular FF...I mean what do meant by regular ffs

Dhanyawad for your comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very Interesting story ya
Eagerly waiting for next part
Plz update it soon😊

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