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Posted: 7 years ago
There's so many links Yaar...and I am on through my mobile 😕
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There you will get all my stories or you can even Google

Here's the name
1) pure love have the ability to change the person (completed)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guyz
Any one wants teaser for future updates ???


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Posted: 7 years ago
Pictures for previous 2 parts
maan's home

Mohinder Handa
Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you for all your likes and comments guyz
next update after 15 june only if i get maximum amount of comment

P.s I still have my blog which is password protected...just saying

you know samjhdar ko ishara kafi hai
Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Gullam chapter 3

Note : some of scenes may disturb you ...if you are not comfortable please avoid reading this ff but I don't want any negative comments...or not am going to change my genre ...maan is slave...and he's going to treated as such...again saying if you are not comfortable please stop reading

Maan reached handa haveli at 8 am and saw his maalik sitting usually on his throne discussing some village matter with the people of Panchayat ... He reached near him and without saying anything knelt down at his feet ...mohinder handa noticed his presence near him and consciously or unconsciously started caressing his head while still talking to those people


After sometime when those people left from there ...his guard come forward with a noose in his hand and hand over it to mohinder...which he drop it around maan's neck who was still looking down in submission ... mohinder tight the grip of that noose around his neck... making him choke and forcing him to look at him...but he immediately drop his eyes...as his master gaze was intimidating him so much ...


after chocking him for few more second he loose the grip but was holding the leash in his hand he said
"kitna time ho rha hai...aur kitne baje tune aana tha " Maan didn't reply anything as he knew his master hate excuses...if he's going to get any punishment it's only going get worse if he started giving excuses so he remains mum and mohinder do all the talking

" kaha hua hai tujhe ki subha hone se pehle Tu bheravgarh Mai hona chaiye ...aur 8 bje pohcha hai Tu yaha ...sabse khas gullam hai Tu humara aur pehli baar late Aya hai isliye is Baar chod the hai..agar galti dubara hui toh saza milegi ...ab ja... geet tera intezaar kar rhi hogi "

Maan nods his head and got up to leave but mohinder pull his leash making him drop at his feet again...and mohinder started laughing
he was thinking that his slave is so innocent and a fool...but he didn't know who the real maan is

He stopped laughing and and take out the noose from his neck ...and pat his head saying 'ja'

...

Geet his choti malkin ...he still remember the time when she was born ...some months after he fully became his master's slave ...mallik called near him to meet the small baby who was going to be his choti malkin ... she was looking like a cute doll he was mesmerized after looking at that small cute doll...his malik broke his trance and told him that this small doll is very precious so they have to take care of her more than their own life ...he agreed to do so and promised him that he will take care of her and protect her ..then a news came that broke his little heart ...his rano Malkin died after giving birth to this precious doll ...his rano Malkin ...no his rano maa ...she was like a mother to him ...she so much reminded him of his own mother...she always take care of him...and look after his all needs from foods to clothes...he was shattered to know that again he lost his mother ...but then he look at that baby and feel sad for her...as she's never going to know how her mother was she's not going to get her mother's love

...
Maan reached geet's room...and found two maids standing outside her door ...no one is allowed inside her room without permission except her father, maan and his dadima when she's here why she gave him so much liberty to do her work he don't understand..when he's not here her father woke her up ...but whenever he's here ...he always sent him to face her wrath He enters her room which is not less than a princess room ...and found her sleeping peacefully on her canopy bed ...he drool over her for few seconds...the only thing he can do and Only when she's sleeping... she's like a forbidden territory he can watch from far but can't touch ..,..'yeah except her feet' he thought


After coming out from drooling session ...he goes towards the window and open the curtains and let the sunlight enters the room then he goes towards her bedside table and put her cellphone on charge and then he set the alarm which is going to ring in 10 seconds... He got aside with the alarm from her bed and counts from 1 to 10 and on 11 second a flying pillow came to his direction...and other and other ...but he escaped her all targets and she finally got up with her eyes still closed and yelled

" maan ye alarm band kar"

He switched off the alarm as now he knows she's awake ...and going to open her eyes only before her mother's portrait which is on one side of the room Now she's sitting on bed with her legs hanging down and points him towards her feet he knew what it meant and he quickly went towards her and kneel down before her and slipped her feets in the slippers
...she stands and shoved him aside making her way towards her mother's portrait


Maan balanced his weight on his both hands to save his head from banging down on floor coz of her shoving which is not new for him

He got up and found her eyes opened...she smiles before her mother's portrait ...and after few seconds she turned at his direction and said 'leave' which is a short form of 'leave and send those maids who are standing outside and wait outside her door'

After sometime maids come outside and signal him to go inside as the choti Malkin was calling him...he again enter her room and found her sitting infront of mirror applying lipgloss
...he come near her and knelt down beside her chair with a little anxiety in his mind as what she's going to do with him now...he remembers...that just last week geet wrote gadha in Hindi on his forehead with water proof eyeliner ...which automatically come out after 12 hours but he had to roamed liked that the whole day clinching laughter where ever he goes he was so much embarrassed but still unable to hate the girl he swear to protect for his life...and one time geet shredded his shirt just because she didn't like the colour...then he shuddered remembering the incident happened two weeks back ...she made him wear her highest heels and told him to walk in it throughout this room ...he take few steps very carefully then he didn't know from where the marbles come on the floor and he fell down HARD...so hard that his feet still hurts when touching...and he had to do all the work with paining body... his dadi was also not here to take care of him

When it comes to giving punishment his choti Malkin is much more creative than his malik that's why he's more scared of her than Malik

No precap So what do you think she's going to do guess guess ...

Until next time
Kriti

Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update
mohinder handa punish maan as he was late
maan fear more for the punishment he received form geet his choti malkin which is very creative
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shocking part. I am feeling bad for Maan. He is really being tortured by handas..geet's behaviour is also not acceptable. I why is she so rude with him. Why is Maan bearing this torture when he can easily come out from this mess. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
I m feeling extremely sad for Maan as inhuman n insensitive behaviour of both Mohinder n Geet
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Mohindar punish Maan
And Maan fear for more punishment
Maan and Geet Sean was ceative
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Feeling bad for Maan
Handa's torturing Maan very badly
Specially Maan's choti Malkin
Maan is scared with his choti Malkin because she is very creative for new new punishment
Beautifully written

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