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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1021

Part 51

While Geet was still in dilemma about her and Maan, the reports proved to be the last push for Geet to take a decision to leave..

There is this one para about the keep guessing..I think, that was the most real reality between Maan and Sameera..They both were never very clear about what they felt for other, specially Sameera.

I liked how even Maan is kept thinking about putting himself above the promises, but he is still holding onto the promise of protecting her, but at the same time did not hesitate to tell her about his current thoughts and feelings about Geet.

To love and to be loved, somewhere both needed for their marriage to work, and if the latter is not there, then she can better leave it keeping her love for him..and though her loves her, with the baby thing, she might not want to get into further hurt and guilt...so a better decision from her side.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#1022

Part 52

I am loving the shift in Adeel's feelings done subtly. He had known to the feelings of protection and destruction.

and then one day he gets fascinated towards Geet, the portrayal that he has built in his mind, but with Sameera he is experiencing it for real. He is yet to realize, acknowledge and admit, but the frustration and raised voice is all about it.

now that Geet has left, Dadima realized how she has dragged one poor soul into this mess, the push was like anger on herself along with Maan. But, it feels bad to see Maan this broken and hurt with his childhood memories reforming again in front of him..

and in all this, I am glad that Meera is handling the things in a mature and composed way trying to console and empathize with everyone, holding onto the balance of the home.

Sameer is much more dangerous than he seems to be.until now I was thinking he is materialistic, money minded, but still loves his daughters...but no, he married Meera's mother only for money, he can go to any extent in snatching the money back that is going out of his hands.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1023

Chapter 54 A

"No person ,no place and no creature should have that power to make you cry in fear ."

This is such a strong yet confident statement and Geet thinking about this saying makes herself strong and walks into the forest looking for Maan

though the night life in forest is very much scary and knowing just how timid Geet is makes me wonder about her hidden strength .

Maan's reckless behavior needs to change , he needs to man up

he needs to stand take in all the wrongs and rights but he cannot always want to run away from problems , leaving Geet alone and walking away was such an immature reaction from his side but glad he realizes his mistake apologizes to a frighten Geet and I think Maan himself just thinking about his wife been alone would have frighten him too .

Geet wants to rediscover herself and I think that is great

telling Maan that she wants to give them a chance but now she really wants to go home and visit her family surprisingly Maan agrees and to to also take her to Hoshiapur .

Maan holding onto Geet was actually nice to see and that brought happiness to Geet because all she wants from her husband is loyalty , honesty , respect and love .

Meera and Vicky there is so much of understanding between them

while I'm really feeling bad for Daadima all she ever truly wanted was Maan get himself a decent loving wife and for him to become responsible

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1024

Chapter 54 B

Geet's welcome home was fabulous , filled with so much of warmth and love

but her one statement replying Trishna that " I thought at least here I'll be accepted as I am"

said a lot though she would never intentionally make Maan fall in her family's eyes but been a more relaxed environment been free to be herself it would be natural unconsciously she would blurt out stuff

Maan realizes that his wife was and is very much loved and pampered in her home

while because of him she had to face pain

Maan wanting to stay with Geet but when she tells all that Maan is needed in his business as Vicky cannot handle everything and later too in the room she further explains Maan how he had neglected his responsibilities and its time now for him to become responsible make himself and Daadima proud

Maan realizes that though he never cared about his image before but as a man he is weak

I'm looking forward to seeing how Geet rediscover herself

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1025

Extremely sorry for responding so late

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1026

Originally posted by: taahir004
Extremely sorry for responding so late

its absolutely ok, no worries 😊

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#1027

Part 53

Adeel is cold and indifferent towards the state of his father, but of course there is a reason, he has seen how his mother was treated by him, otherwise he had been caring towards the people who are close to him including Meera, Seema and now Sameera.

so Maan and Adeel both on their way to get their love. Did Adeel too come to know that Geet is on way to Hoshiyaarpur.

Lekin Maan wins the race during the journey at least. batman ki speed se gadi chalate hue he reached first and tried to manaofy Geet..and Geet melted a little..somewhere her trust level has been increased understanding Maan better, his genuine frustration, anger and love and of course the report..

jungle ki taraf..Is it is dangerous, hope not.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#1028

Originally posted by: Twenty1st
I would like to apologise first, been super busy in a way and writing has become a a thing of the past in a way with my current timetable. Anyway Thank you all for liking and commenting, sorry havent been able to like for comment for the previous chapter however hoping to return to normal real soon.

I have uploaded 3 parts to make up for it, plus wanted to change the atmosphere in general. I am still hoping to finish this soon lol, i had never intended to write 50 parts and now we are beyond that😲😆

Anyway hope you continue to like and support
PS: isnt that birdie shooo cute😳

All the thank you pictures that you post are cute and nice.

and a big thanks to you too for all the stories you write here..:)

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#1029

Part 54 A

Did not Maan say it to her that during the Adeel meet time in the hospital, if I remember correctly.

But it is good to see the impact of the words reflected in her from within..the one pampered and protected girl is slowly trying to come out of the shadow and walk the path on her own, with no fear of crowd or of being alone.

glad to see her taking these steps towards becoming mentally strong and independent leaving behind the fear of unknowns, there will be hiccups but good that she has got the intention and a will to do it.

Omg, Sameera, she is an example of how the intoxication and addiction can take all the consciousness and the sense of the mind. All the control on her thought process, her life is taken by the alcoholic state.

only good thing was that what even the rehab could not do was done by the baby..she found a purpose to live, to live for herself and the baby. If Adeel would not have told or kind of forced her, I doubt if she would have come back to Maan as well..He ignited cum forced that another desire to get back to Maan, the only friend and companion of her lonely phase in life and to fulfill a complete and happy family dream of her own.

but she herself is seeing Adeel taking over that place in the dream that she is longing for. ok, I tried to recollect about the mystery man who was engaged and I think I got the clue..hope that is what it is in the story ahead :)

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#1030

Part 54 B

Despite of the hatred he has for his Father for ill-treating his mother, Adeel heads towards that place to be near him when he hears the news of his attack. a soft at heart though with tough exterior..he melts down finally in front of the emotions residing within him.

and I was expecting Handa family to be concerned about Geet the way they love her, and her every sentence will be weighed with the needle pointing to Maan.. and so it happened, but soon the fear and doubt vanished seeing Geet happy and back to her old self.

Geet expressed her desire to seek herself and Maan agreed for that..that testifies his love, to let the their beloved to do what they desire for.

and like Maan's words have an impact on Geet, she too has impacted his life and actions through her words for pushing him towards his responsibilities in business and home..that how love guides one's life and decisions.

I was thinking why the title for this and previous part, consensus..that everyone is in agreement and admitting to themselves about where their heart's desire lies and what they want truly, with all the couples there in the story, specially for Maaneet.

wonderful updates, loved all the parts, happy that everything has started falling in place.

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