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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 7 years ago

#921

Part 87 - A good part. I likded that you didn't drag his guiltness or hide & seek too long. Good that he told her everything and it was clear bet them now. Geet's reaction surprised me. She was not angry on him for hiding this or crossing his line with her consent or anything else. But she was sad that her first night with maan was over and she didn't not remember anything of it. The night she had so much dream about it and it went without giving any experience or any pleasure to her. Even maan was dreaded for her reaction but surprised to see her this reaction and he was relieved of his guilt.

Now maan was enjoying her shy behavior as she knew what had happened bet them. He was ready to do all things very happily which he was hesitating to do last day. But now geet was more shy and maan enjoying teasing her.

Oh...she was on leave still. I thought how come sasha not pointed this to maan. Oops maan almost got caught by sasha when he gave real reason to her about geet's absence.

What maan firing geet from job...? Why..? Then how will we enjoy seeing fallen face of sasha when she comes to know who geet is.?

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 7 years ago

#922

Part 87 - so still ram or elders did not know about how maan saved geet. and one more thing I forgot to mention that geet got her periods and I too was relieved like maan that she was not pregnant. Hoping some office drama and geet's new story to fool sasha

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9247818642

@9247818642

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Posted: 7 years ago

#923

Hey I read ur masoom ishq and I really liked it plz send me ur blog link plz plz

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#924

Chapter 80

Maan in Mumbai while Geet and Dadi will spend the night

at Malholta Mansion

both Geet and Maan claim that they will not miss the other but both did miss

each other terribly

Maan now realized he is way to use to have Geet in his arms and once again it was his illusion

that she is there with him which eventually made him sleep

while Geet went and slept with Dadi

Sasha once again trying to provoke Geet and its good to see that Geet didn't get angry

instead she acted much more matured compared to Sasha

oh Daadi enjoyes teasing both Maan and Geet about Honeymoon and he feels so shy and embarrassed

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#925

Chapter 81

Maan and Geet leaves for their trip and he can see just how excited she is

the only problem is that they have to keep their marriage a secret

Maan enjoying his wife's fun filled behavior

Geet has heard that food at the Dhaba's are tasty and she wanted to eat there

though Maan hesitant but for her sake he agrees and both enjoyed their lunch

its good that Geet actually makes Maan experience new stuff and I think with her been his wife

he will enjoy the different colors of life

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#926

Chapter 82

The day started off well and Maan assigning Geet to design both the hospital and the school

this for me tells the amount of trust he has in her capabilities

both going to the water falls and at first Geet was scared but then when Maan goes and gets his phone , and Geet tries to prove to him she is not scared but she goes to stand on a rock

that is dangerous and she looses her balance too , the area near a waterfall is normally soaked

with water so rocks even trees may sometimes be very fragile in its setting and Geet had not realized she had stepped onto a rock that was on soaked mud causing the rock to slip away taking Geet too

this whole scene with Maan trying to get Geet back to safety while she hangs on a fragile tree

that entire scene is so scary and horrific too once fallen into the water it takes the person away down dangerous falls

so now I want to see what you have install for Angel and Mittu

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#927

Chapter 83

Maan in such a broken state and yes he would be because like he says Geet

is his life his wife his everything

the doctor tries to praise Maan but at the moment all he is , is just a husband no other tag

is that much important to him

and doctor tells him that Geet needs his body heat to survive and yes its difficult firstly Maan and Geet still has not even gotten to that level second been with her while she is unconscious does seem wrong but like the doctor says its about life and death situation so Maan has to give his body heat to Geet and its again amazing to see how even in her unconscious state her body and mind reacts to Maan

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#928

Chapter 84

Maan having tears in his eyes apologizing to his Mithu for she was unconscious

and without her permission they would be uniting in body and soul

though I feel its not wrong but understanding Maan's state of mind

and the fact that if Geet does find out how will she react to it all this was difficult for him but

he had to bring her back and it was needed

though it was the first time for both none could enjoy the moment

and when she awakes she still thinks about he jumped into the river and she was scared

but with time she realizes that both survived that ordeal and Maan tells her that the villagers saved them

changing Geet into her clothes and though it was awkward it was also needed

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#929

Chapter 85

Maan feels guilty and its understanding but Geet also notices him

and he cannot fool her she does know him well

Geet with the villagers socializing with them and laughing smiling making Maan feel happy but this another trait about Geet that is so endearing she never treats a person according to their financial earnings

Ram arrives with the chopper as he was extremely worried about both Maan and Geet

and the doctor also tells him that both of them would have lost their lives

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#930

Chapter 86

Both Priya and Daadima was worried seeing Maan carrying Geet in his arms

and returning by chopper with Ram

Ram however had explained them everything he knew what the villagers and the doctor told him

Geet still weak and Maan helps her

but she has realized that there is a change in him and she thinks its because of the accident that happened with her but she also knows that Maan himself was in danger so something is really wrong however she is not able to really point out but its clear that he is trying to avoid any closeness with her and I have to admire her that she once again saw the change in Maan

on the other hand now I feel Maan is just spoiling his matters between himself and Geet

he needs to speak to her only feel guilty if she dislikes what he did but he cannot just feel guilty now

staying away from his wife that's wrong