OS - The Love In His Eyes

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IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

good suggestion

i know😉

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

sabi dont again make me to doubt u😡

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

thanks for the pm!

beautiful emotional OS! glad Maan realised his feelings! Geet got her love...

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Sneha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

beautiful dear loved it...

thank you for the pm...

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Nice update dear finally Mann realised his love for Geet

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Lovely OS sabi...and congratulations for completing two years of writing

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Lovely OS

When we r about to loose some thing

Precious we find out what importance

It holds in our life

Maan didn't recognise his feelings for

Geet he was fighting with himself that

He cant love but he was already in love

Seeing Maan"s eyes filled with love was

The best thing for geet

Happy ending

Edited by vasavi_sri - 7 years ago

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Lovely story. Emotional as well
Happy that maan realised his love for geet nd finally gave her the love she deserved.
Thanks for this amazing one shot

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

beautiful os..
though I would have loved it if u make it as ss instead of os . I wanted to see their journey in details ... specially the moments when the came close to each other or fall in love ...
anyways . .I completely loved it ...
thank God maan realised his love before it's too late ...
keep it up dear and thanks for the pm