Mortal Promises!#T5!*CH54&Note@Pg130,140[THREAD 6 opened] - Page 65

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: WaveTeal



Thank you so much Khushi baby... You know tumhe update ka intezar rehta hain aur mujhe tumhare res ka...So I will definitely try to update Asap!! 😳

Twist - Not as such.. Thoda sa kand hone wala hain, twist nahin keh saktey isko.


Okay

Kaand Jo bhi ho bada maza aane wala hai šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow baby
Tum update Kar rahi ho 😃

Thank you so much šŸ¤—
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom


Okay

Kaand Jo bhi ho bada maza aane wala hai šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰


Baby...Expectations low rakho...I am not sure about today's update!! šŸ˜† Kahin maza kam saza zayada na ho!! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: WaveTeal


Baby...Expectations low rakho...I am not sure about today's update!! šŸ˜† Kahin maza kam saza zayada na ho!! šŸ˜†


Aisa ho hi nahi sakta baby ki saza ho 😊

I will sleep in a while
Shall read the update tomorrow
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Aww

All the best yaar šŸ‘šŸ¼

Sabse bada sar dard

U have to check each and every part now šŸ˜•


This is world's most annoying thing.. I am working on backups... I don't trust IF now...!!
Edited by WaveTeal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suwaibah

Awesome update.

Loved it..


Originally posted by: Geet980

So sweet. Cute maaneet.


Thank you very much for your comment... please be a little elaborate with your comments...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: gill123

Wow finally Jasmeet going to get engaged nice update now waiting for samera reaction thanks for pm waiting for next part

Thanks dear for you feedback!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manjeet6

Awesome update
Loved the bonding of three brothers
Loved their teasing
Geet's tantrums are amazing
Finely Maaneet ka roka ho raha hai
Poor Sameera she is soo sad

Glad that you loved their teasing... Thanks for your comment!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Sorry for late likes and comments!


Chap 51

Part 1

amazing pic ā¤ļø

fabulous update! wonderfully written! Loved that Maan knew that Dev wanted to question him!

never expected Dev to directly confront Maan abt his status.

Liked how Maan handled Dev's questions! Omg Vicky is a foodiešŸ˜†

Glad Maan was honest with Dev and reaveled that he is getting married to Geet! Maan proudly says he loves Geet!

Maan wanted to tell Dev something abt NT but disturbed! hope he gets an opportunity soon!

Dev happy seeing this teasing Maan!

Maan went to see Geet but his two bros follow! wow amazed that Maan knew that Dev was there! Vicky is hilarious! 🤣

omg love the part that he is also a jasoos like his dadi!

Geet wants Maan to talk lovingly but he can't as his bros are there! Maan tries 2 hint but Geet fails 2 read in between the lines!

Maan calls her jaan and they tease him! Geet embarrassed as she realises that Dev and Maan were there!

Adore the love and bond between the Khuranas brothers!

wonder what surprise has planned for Geet! 😃





Glad that you liked the picture. 😃

Vicky is indeed foodie and a very cheerful character...

I am happy that you liked the bond between the Khurana Brothers...

Thanks a lot for reading and your outstanding response comment... Loved it!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: curtus

Chapter 51 part 1@

Astounding image. So cute. Adorable.
Thank you so much for updating my favorite story. I wait for mp to be updated so much.
Astounding update, funny, entertaining part with brotherhood and geet's cuteness overloaded

Finally maan told everything to dev. He thought vicky is sleeping but the jasus little khurana was awake nd had been listening all.
I love this maan 2 d core. He is a man with decency, loyalty nd chivalry. The way he confessed to dev about his love for his little bird was so cute n heart melting.
The veg biryani scene is so funny he he
šŸ˜†
Maan called his impish brothers as bandar nd his tantrum queen thought he called her monkey. Oh how much i love this maaneet nd their cute nok jhok. So much light hearted yet deep bonding they have.
Loved how she send biryani 2 maan. Nd more importantly how maan understands her care. That is so cute.
So they used to pass things amongst them like this? Childhood love is so beautifully shown. So pure.ā¤ļø


Aww baby.. ā­ļø Your comment is like that 1000watt bulb which makes me do the happy dance...

Thank you so much for your encouraging words!! Love you ā¤ļø

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