MG :AN INTRICATE KNOT OF RELATIONSHIPS|| PT 1,TSR|8,11||MARCH 16,2019 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Eagerly waiting on next chapter
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Anxiously waiting for you to continue with this story too
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Thank you I'll be waiting
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I have typed half of the update
completing it and then will post ..
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PART 1




January 10th , 1992

The day was the same, there was nothing that could define the changing scenario of the time yet there were many things that couldn't be changed now.
There was a young couple holding an infant close, tears glistening their eyes as they looked at the infant in their arms. The woman who held the tiny baby and kissed his temple and her tears fell on the forehead of the tiny infant.
He is perfect Raj, she said as she held her baby close to herself. Rajveer Singh Khurana looked at his wife Naina and she was holding their baby who was stillborn.

We have to let him go Naina. He said as he adored the baby who was just a perfect combination of both of them. He and Naina loved their baby for the last time for letting him go to the place where he would be safe.

It was a year since they buried their only child and both Naina and Rajveer never thought they could come over the grief anytime soon. It always felt that it was yesterday when Naina told Raj that they were going to be parents and how they were waiting for their child's arrival in their life when the sudden incident fell over them and Naina had an accident which robbed them of their child.

Raj, why did it happened to us.. Naina asked as she saw the place where now their baby was buried. She still had tears in her eyes. The accident that Naina had robbed them from their only child and it was actually a miracle that Naina survived, it was later discovered that due to the severity of the accident naina's uterus was removed and they couldn't have more children. Overcoming their grief was difficult but they tried and frequently visited the place where their son was laid to rest.

The place they chose was the property that was owned by Khurana's and Naina and Raj decided to convert it into a garden.

He was not meant to be with us Naina, he will be looked at by your father. Our son will be looked after well.

2nd June , 1994

A woman was crying in pain, her little one had decided to mark his presence soon in their lives. Her mother in law was with her and instead of going to any hospital she chose home birth. One more ripple of pain passed through her and she knew that her little one was very eager to meet her. She wasn't due until next month but her precious baby was eager to meet his mother.

Another scream ripped through the manor and it was now Rudra Sehrawat insisted that he would stay near his wife but his mother protested against.

This doesn't happen Rudra and you can't be here. I am here for Nitya. You be with your father. His mother belittles him but he was firm in his decision.

Ma, this is my wife and she is carrying my child and I will be here for her. Nitya isn't doing well, the birth shouldn't have taken so long, he concluded and took the place beside his wife. He wiped her face as another scream erupted from her throat. Rudra supported his wife should as she bent over her swollen stomach to push.

That's right Mrs. Shekhawat, keep pushing said the young doctor whom he had called in his home. The midwife was assisting the birth and it was going painfully long. Suddenly there was blue light erupted from Nitya's belly and she felt that she was being ripped apart and the following moment a soft cry was heard. Nitya Sherawat lost her conscious as her baby made into the world.

The doctor checked Nitya and declared that she was well. Just tired from the birth. The midwife checked the baby and sparks from her fingers couldn't find the magical core of the baby. It was not possible she passed the baby to the doctor and he checked the baby with his wand. It was a doctor's wand that was specially designed for medical professionals. His wand pointed over the infant and he spelled a charm to detect the magical ability of the newborn but found none.

The baby.. doesn't have.. the midwife stuttered..

What.. asked an anxious father, who was looking at the doctor and the midwife checking his newborn son again and again.

We cannot detect the magical core of the infant. The doctor said as he checked again.

It cannot be possible.. during scans nothing of that sort was detected. Said Rudra as saw the baby opening his eyes and he stared into the replica of his own chocolate brown having speckles of honey brown in them.

The baby doesn't have any magical abilities sir. The doctor declared. Rudra found his mother doing the complex spell of his son..

Ma, no it can destroy his magical core. Rudra tried to stop his mother but she declared as she performed the spell.

Your son is born a human, Rudra. Her declaration was enough and he knew that no matter what he would do , they cannot keep their precious son with them. Maybe that was the reason nitya's labor was awfully long when compared to other magical labors specially when a gifted magical creature is involved.

3rd June , 1994

Little blossoms orphanage

He has just arrived in the midnight. The child is not even a day old. The parents were unable to care for him. The caretaker of the orphanage told him. Naina held the little baby in her arms. After two years of the accident, she and Raj had decided to adopt a little one, so they had visited the orphanage. The baby that caught Naina's attention was a newborn baby who was smiling in his sleep and he stole Naina's heart. That was the moment she had decided that she and Raj will adopt that little one. The baby didn't have a name.

Naina held the baby in her hands and the baby coiled in her arms and smiled while still sleeping. Raj looked at the awestruck expression of his wife. There was a smile lingering on her lips after two years that was truly reaching her eyes. Rajveer Singh khurana knew that moment that he would be the one who would value their love and would be with them.

Naina, I would complete the formalities. He said and left while Naina chose to act according to the maternal instinct she felt the moment she saw the baby. He was very fair. Little hair were there and they were looking very cute making him adorable. His cheeks had small dimples as she noticed when unknowingly he smiled in his sleep dreaming of something.

The matron who looked after the babies looked at the young woman in front of her and she knew that the new little one would be going to be raised very well.

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That's all for now.
All reviews are welcomed.


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Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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two parents two family
But one didn't bless like other's even if other family blessed with their son they couldn't keep it
so cruel fate
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update so on one side Raj and Naina lost their child and Naina lost the chance to be a mother coz of accident while on other side another parent had to give away their child coz he was born human and had no magical powers so now baby who was in orphanage Raj and Naina adopt him and it felt like he belong to them
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Posted: 7 years ago
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where is the update??? cannot see it😕
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Nice update dear Naina and Raj list there son in an accident and buried in there land make it as garden and visited there here one magical couple deliver the son but he is not a magical boy but human so there did left in orphanage there Naina and raj adopted him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That's just a Superb and Amazing Start

I felt so bad for Naina and Raj first she gave birth to a still born baby and then she had a horrible accident causing her to lose her baby once again
but two years a baby was to be born according to magical pregnancy but this baby had no magical core and his grandmother didn't want a human baby so the baby was given to an orphanage
and this Naina and Raj adopted this baby

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