The Written Apology*Maaneet SS*UPDATED CH6,7@Pg66*COMPLETED*28th Mar

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

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Posted: 7 years ago

#601

part 5 (1)
awesome update..
abhi tak geet bhag rehi thi maan ke peeche now it's maan's turn !! waise he deserve it ..kitna rulaya bechari geet ko 😔
btw I loved geet's haq jatana on maan 😳 angry tigress !!
maan got a slap instead of answer 😲 geet don't leave him today ..ab jake utt aaya hai pahad ke neeche 😆

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#602

thank u so much for the pws dear 😊

Edited by sagorika93 - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: sagorika93
thank u so much for the pws dear ..
but the pws were not working after chapter 5 part 1 ..I can't open 5 part 2 and other chapters ..

Yeah I pmed you...Is it still not working dearie?? 😕

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: WaveTeal
<font color="#009999">Yeah I pmed you...Is it still not working dearie??😕</font>

I just saw ur pm ..that's why edit my post 😛

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WaveTeal

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: sagorika93

I just saw ur pm ..that's why edit my post 😛

Great!! 😆

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#606

part 5 (2)
superb update ..
maan ka toh aaj lucky day hai first slap actually first slap by his would be ..then kiss then confession .. but his hearts wants more lol .. expectation dekh lo kya pata ek aur kiss mill jaye ..bhul gaya bechara lalach buri bala 😆
finally confession happened ..m happy . but there is something more to know for maan ..😲
btw maan is getting desperate to marry geet ..hahaha

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#607

part 6
what a twist !!
geet revealed some shocking truth about her ..but maan remain calm ..nd composed ..well that's why we love MSK ..he is a perfect business man ..who don't leave any loophole ..
he already knows all this still his love for geet didn't change ..he has given a fair chance to geet ..which I really appreciate ...

chalo anat bhala toh sab bhala 😃
as usual rocking update ..

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#608

part 7
beautiful lovely update ...
loved geet's heartily confession ..and the sweet nickname "coco" 😳 rough nd tough Msk ko coco ..only geet can do that !!
and finally the khulasa of ranveer gatha !! hehe jisne maan ka chain wain rain sab le gaya peechle 24 ghanto mei 😆
btw geet was right maan should write a book on how to screw up the marriage proposal or confession 😛
and last but not the least geet toh "woh" ladki nikli 😲

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#609

interesting and unique epilogue ..
I loved ur unique epilogue for this story ... couple bhi toh unique hai 😉
I know geet is getting more crazy day by day but still maan u should never take panga with a writer specially if she is ur wife ...pata nehi kb kya likh de 😆
.enjoyed reading the story ... beautiful ending ❤️