Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Painful update
Feeling bad for Geet n wat that monster do to her
Maan restless seeing Geet in that condition n he somehow found out wat happened to her, he feeling guilty now , nicely written

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Nice update

Now some thing odd happen here

Maaneet consummated after being tortured.

Maan forgot all about that

Geet is suffering from mental illness

Waiting for next

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#113

How can he leave aft that

Was it just lust for him

They had an abusive past

N his actions pushed her further into darkness

Y give hope to a hopeless when u intend to crush it

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Emotional update!!!Geet and her friends went to film...she had to go rest room and missing...Maan found Geet in unconscious state...Geet's bro Brij got scared and he called docter...a doctor was helpless and he said tat she was weak from last session...Brij was worried...Maan wants to know about reason behind Geet's condition but Brij denied it so Maan went to meet her doctor...Geet and Brij were tortured by someone😡who is that moron?Maan came on time to save them...in that situation Maaneet got close and he left her there...now he feels guilty about it...Loved it so much...Waiting eagerly for the next update dear

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Awesome update
Geet fainted in the mall Maan called brij
Wo Geet ko hospital le kar jaate hai Brij Dr se puchta hai ki wo kab thik hogi
Geet ko iss tarah itni pain me dekh kar Maan's heart aches
He wanted to know the reason of geet's this condition but brij's ignore him
Maan jabardasti Dr se gee ki pain ki wajah jaanta hai
He regrets that ki agar wo eight years ago usse chodh kar na gaya hota tou aaj Geet ki aisi halat na hoti aur jis culprit ne Geet ki ye halat ki hai once again he killed him
Beautifully written

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

i am relieved that maan is not solely responsible for geet's condition

there is something wrong with their past. brij is such a good brother yr

did he knew about maaneet

m curious to read

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Geet was fallen unconscious in washroom
Maan was so scared and sad to see her like this
He tried to ask Brij but he didn't disclose anything about it
He canceled his date with sameera
And enquired the doctor about the incident
Why he was feeling sad to leave her
Waiting to read more

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Thankfully Maan was there and made both Geet's friends check again the washroom when he notices that a section is been constructed he goes there and sees Geet lying unconscious

scared , angry at her guards he takes her home and Brij gets a doctor

though Maan has fear and is curious as to what has happened with her Brij refuses to tell him

Maan then threatens the doctor and he tells Maan everything

Maan remembers when both Brij and Geet were young the beatings they got and once Geet had phoned him to help Brij and that very night both Geet and Maan became one but he had just left her in the morning

is Maan leaving her caused more problems or that something happen to her that has changed her life