Enchantress [Completed!] - Page 36

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Tho thek hai na

I'll give a straight simpler story next

jaha they meet... struggle... understand and slowly fall in love maybe

wait do i remember something

why does that sound " your my home!!😡

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

im not going to get excited reading that this time

that statement only gives me the vibe of " ln your dreams!" with you smirking at my plight😆

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

wow...you caught it right...
the story is about "in your dreams.."
likhne mein do-teen saal lagenge..tab tak wait karna haan to get it even..😳

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

wow...you caught it right...
the story is about "in your dreams.."
likhne mein do-teen saal lagenge..tab tak wait karna haan to get it even..😳

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

are you praising your own story or cursing 😆
but BIG warning don't say anything about you my home...a possessive fan is here 😉

Originally posted by: shanilaa

Hey sporthy I read ur story U are my home n from then I am a fan of your writing well about this story well written no doubt but if u are asking about flaws well it's bit confusing for me it's really hard to comprehend the reality I mean what is real or what is an illusion well I guess this is not the flaw as u choose to to write in this way and I must say u succeeded in that but as u say next will going to be the last part please let's make it long in detail so that it will overcome all the confusions as i really dont understand the connection of building and project what about his girlfriend i thought she is saving him she knows all about him well one more thing do start withing U r my home too I missed that story ...take care

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

I'm not at all possessive about any of my stories

tho tum gali do ya mai

I would never get offended😳

I'm possessive about the characters i write though😎

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

chalo i'Il help you a little here

maan and usski girlfriend ka relationship it's just for their own selfish reasons

i mean he is with her coz he gets distracted from his thoughts, ghosts and all the other negatives surrounding him (or lets settle for that at least for now)

and his girlfriend is with him coz she needs a namesake relationship a puppy kind of person maybe

this much is already established in the story

and about what's reality and what's not... the building and shourya its all going to be cleared in the last part

but trust me it's all there right before your eyes

it's just that its hard to comprehend Maan khurana in such a context

confusion tho i created intentionally to distract people from seeing what im seeing as a writer

you are my home though is a different story all together... I'll get back to it sooner... i knew there were a lot of people reading it but i never knew it was loved so much Thank you so much for letting me know❤️

super glad to know i have such a reader who is willing to help🤗

(hosake tho maan ka naam replace kar k padlo jawab miljaye😉)

it will be long enough to tie and untie the loose ends

baki not everyone is going to accept the end

I'm prepared to face the burnt😉😆

thanks for reading again😊