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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a sweet and often ignored topic of sibling love and their phases of life! Our siblings are our first best friends and enemies and as we grow older and branch out, that equation changes but the balance stays same!

Lovely story. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Loved the story. Very different concept
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting
loved the last twist new girl dev be aware now you are gonna trap
dev was having negative thoughts
have to say geet is more smart and understanding
at last he see the whole matter with open eye
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I have read this entire story with big big smile on my face... Beautiful...can understand Dev's anger...& My smile got bigger with last twist...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Amazing as usual..
But I would like to point out a little mistake if u didon mind,
When Maan n Dev were kinds they were 10 n 4
When they grew up they were 30 n 26???
How come the age gap reduced 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sundari.

Amazing as usual..

But I would like to point out a little mistake if u didon mind,
When Maan n Dev were kinds they were 10 n 4
When they grew up they were 30 n 26???
How come the age gap reduced 😆


Ha ha

Thanks for pointing out

From start I was confused with age difference and was changing it lots of time. So that is why forgot to check

Oops moment 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wonderful one..
Dev's perspective in a story, makes it different along with the concept, and while that is there, Maan-Geet do not take a complete back seat.

there are times, when it is difficult to cope up with the feelings that the love one receives is getting shared specially in siblings and more chances are there of the relation becoming bitter..but glad all three tried on their own not to break it, rather bridge and build it again.

while Maan had been trying different ways to bring everyone he loves together, actually impressed with the way Geet dealt with it, that cake making question kind of bowled Dev out of his reservations although irritated him at first glance, followed by her straightforward talk..then Dev too allowed himself to retrospect.

my comment is sounding too serious to me as well, while actually I loved the light-hearted take in the story 😆

and the ending, Dev sets out for his own experience of love..loved it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely one shot ...
both brother loves each other so much ...but when maan fall in love with geet and went aboard with her dev felt left out ...he used to blame geet for this separation...
but it was for their betterment maan choose this path ...
loved the story ... unique and beautiful ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing one..
Loved it..
Thanks for pm..

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