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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223

Thanks for the forewarning Lakshmi 😊
Have read mostly light -hearted tales on GF until now 😉

Gearing up for an emotional ride of Maaneet's journey...😳



Thanks Dearie...😊

WELCOME TO ORP 🤗

Well..its definetly not a fun one..very emotional ...but not dark...so, enjoy reading it 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter1

Interesting start..
Geet is fond of animals
So it's love at first sight for Maan..😉
Geet isn't aware that someone is watching her keenly 😳

Present..
What's going on ??😲
Maan has been married to Geet for almost a year... he doesn't want to acknowledge her... let alone see her...That's too rude.. 😡
Poor Geet...glad she has someone to share her sorrows 😭
So Geet is leaving...is it the end of their relationship...😕
Wonder what had happened over the past one year...
Why does Maan hate her?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 2

Past
Maan-Geet had a rushed wedding against their wishes.😲
Maan's prejudice against Geet's family.
Poor Geet lost her Grandma on her wedding and can neither grieve 😭
Within a day and her life is upside down but still is hopeful
Infatuated by her husband at first sight lol...😆
Do I get to say it again...I know you aren't liking the fact that I hate Maan...can't help it lol😆
HE'S WAY TOO RUDE...😡😡(okay apart from being a little considerate for just a teeny weeny bit -post wedding😛 )

Present
Geet has bonded with other members of the Khuranas over the year 😊
So Geet's going to her home town for a month to complete her studies and to attend a wedding 😳
Dadima's feeling guilty for her actions..
An entire year passed and Maan is yet to know that Geet is Pari... 😲funny that Maan hasn't seen Geet's face even once ...after all a year has 365 days lol..😆
Wonder what will Maan do when he finds out Geet is Pari lol 😛 😉




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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223

Chapter 2

Past
Maan-Geet had a rushed wedding against their wishes.😲
Maan's prejudice against Geet's family.
Poor Geet lost her Grandma on her wedding and can neither grieve 😭
Within a day and her life is upside down but still is hopeful
Infatuated by her husband at first sight lol...😆
Do I get to say it again...I know you aren't liking the fact that I hate Maan...can't help it lol😆
HE'S WAY TOO RUDE...😡😡(okay apart from being a little considerate for just a teeny weeny bit -post wedding😛 )

Present
Geet has bonded with other members of the Khuranas over the year 😊
So Geet's going to her home town for a month to complete her studies and to attend a wedding 😳
Dadima's feeling guilty for her actions..
An entire year passed and Maan is yet to know that Geet is Pari... 😲funny that Maan hasn't seen Geet's face even once ...after all a year has 365 days lol..😆
Wonder what will Maan do when he finds out Geet is Pari lol 😛 😉






Thank you so much for your detailed lovely dovely comments for ORP 1 & 2... 🤗

I am really humbled...😊

Well, yes, for Maan, its love at first sight when he got to see the girl at his farmhouse. He went into such a madness that he ignored the fact that he has got married to the same girl and he has been ignoring her and not even glancing at her.. That's the twist of the story.

Yes, their marriage happened amidst all tensions...so, do read further and comment when you are back...I will be eagerly waiting. 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 3

Maan needs to learn to keep his anger in check... smiley22

Finally he has realized that he hasn't seen Geet's face lol smiley36Maan beware more shocking realizations are on you way...smiley17

He is one confused soul .... experiencing all sorts of emotions at once....

At last Maan realized that he had been unfair to Geet smiley1

Dadima is hurting coz of Maan's behaviour towards Geetsmiley18

Wonder how is Geet coping up?

Like the way you describe the characters' emotions Lakshmi... it's quite intense smiley32smiley32



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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 4

Beautifully written Lakshmi...👏

It's human tendency to take things for granted .... You start to realize its importance after you lose it...

That's the case with Maan ... one side he is confused with his feelings for Pari other side Geet's words haunt him to no end...

Maan finally has accepted consciously that Geet is HIS WIFE after a year in denial

The absence of Geet has made Maan realize his past mistakes

Shantima has shown the reality of the situation to Maan

Realizations are too painful .... Maan is hurting now ...

Can imagine the hurt Geet might have been through😭

The conversation between Geet and Shantima is sweet but could feel the reluctance in returning back from Geet...

What's on Geet's mind ?

Dadima is happy seeing that Maan wants to work on his relationship 😊

Maan going to Hoshiyarpur... is it too late?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223

Chapter 3

Maan needs to learn to keep his anger in check... smiley22

Finally he has realized that he hasn't seen Geet's face lol smiley36Maan beware more shocking realizations are on you way...smiley17

He is one confused soul .... experiencing all sorts of emotions at once....

At last Maan realized that he had been unfair to Geet smiley1

Dadima is hurting coz of Maan's behaviour towards Geetsmiley18

Wonder how is Geet coping up?

Like the way you describe the characters' emotions Lakshmi... it's quite intense smiley32smiley32



Hey ....welcome back dear...just read your comment. Hmm..its just the very beginning of a journey full of realizations and regrets for Maan. 😳. So..follow the chapters. 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

Edited /Updated post for Chapter 4 moving to Chapter 5 😉

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Chapter 5

Superb Chapter Lakshmi

The way you write gives clarity to the situation

Can't stand people like Manjit...

Poor Geet have to bear all the pain pasting a smile on her face ... so that her loved ones aren't hurt... but for how long will she be able to keep this act..

It wouldn't be easy for Maan to mend his mistakes ... the hurt he has caused runs too deep in Geet's heart..

Past

Another twist

Maan meets Pari again but the situation isn't in his favour...

Uh-oh Geet finds out that Maan loves Pari which is Geet herself lol... another confusion

Wonder now what will be Geet's reaction when she'll know who's PARI lol🤔

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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 6

So Geet has decided to move to another place ....

Loved the way you have incorporated humour in this tensed situation 👏

Geet engrossed in her work lol😛Titoo having a tough time gaining her attention lol😆

The most awaited moment- Maan finally has seen Geet's face 😛

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