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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#681

Fabulous updates and very well written. Each and every emotion that Maan and Geet are feeling is expressed so beautifully. Poor Geet is constantly reminded of maan's pari which is causing her more pain. She must be tired of pretending in front of all and constant teasing must have taken a toll on her. Loved how Rano answered back to Manjeet as she feels confident because of Maan's behavior. She will be shattered if she comes to know the reality of Maan and Geet. waiting for next.

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#682

great update dear
geet is totally confused with the way maan is behaving
continue soon...

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#683

Lovely update
Loved it
Geet s not able fake anymore and feeling guilty ... All her cousin r teasing geet with maan ... Maan s following geet everywhere ... Manjet again trying to taunt geet but rano spoke boldly ...
Maan makes geet wear necklace and all people r shocked to see the rare jewel ..
Maan has long way to go and rectify his mistake ..
Continue soon
Waiting

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Maangeet

@maangeet.gmmg

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#684

superb update lovely waiting for next

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seema saini

@HateMee

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#685

I can't believe this this girl still behaving all cute and caring after tolerating his cruel behaviour towards her for 1 damnn year. And it's high time he should do more than bumping and staring

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seema saini

@HateMee

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#686

And whenever he call her Pari its feel like he is betraying Geet and her love

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#687

Super awesome update. I truly loved the way Maan couldn't take his eyes off Geet and was following her around. Loved the way Geet was cribbing cutely and her sweet adorable antics...And loved Maan drooling over her and losing himself in her:):):) Hayyyeee...So dreamy...He so badly wanted to catch her alone, make her wear the family heirloom jewellery & talk to her...And here all the people were busy teasing both of them...

I feel so sad when Geet keeps feeling that she is not entitled to feel love and desire for Maan...the way she was comparing the reality of all that happened versus the teasing that she is getting...her dreams of enjoying her marriage and getting the love of her hubby versus what truly happened...its breaking her every single moment...She does not know that she is the Pari Maan loves to the core. And that he is here to seek her forgiveness and confess his love...When will Maan get a chance to talk to her in the midst of all this? And now Geet runs away broken hearted. Its all thanks to that evil witch! I want Maan to blast her in front of the guest warning her not to raise her fingers on his Geet or their relationship. Ask that witch to look at her own daughter who I believe is actually in a love marriage with her fiance...not match made...just like Preetho! I am so happy that all were so stunned by Maan making Geet wear his heirloom jewellery. Such a magnificent piece! That witch could not open her mouth! She ought to be humiliated in front of the whole village for everything that she has said & done to Geet & her mumma...

Worried about Geet not eating and looking pale...And forever in worry thinking that Dadimaa has sent Maan to act as if their marriage was all ok. She is so stressed and feeling so broken inside...Thinking of all that he has said and feels that she is not worthy...Can Maan just take permission from Darji and bring Geet to his farmhouse? And talk to her...talk his heart out to her...confess how he met her in that very place and that she has always been his life & soul...Its just that he was so so stupid not to have seen her when they got married...Pls pls pls...I hope you can make this happen na...I want them to discover each other...with nothing hidden...even the truth about what happened with Annie...No holds barred between them...It will be so beautiful:):):)

And since Geet is going for interview in her hubby's company unknowingly...I hope Maan interviews her and recruits her...and both of them work on the Gurudhwara project staying in the farmhouse na...Ooops! This is my wishful thinking:):):)

Edited by Nefret19 - 7 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#688

kab maan geet k saath khul kar baat kar sakega...sab kuch clear karega...

lovely updates...

loved them very much...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#689

I'm glad that I logged on today seeing this thread and its updates

I was indeed happy

Chapters 12 & 13

These were just Awesome Chapters

It has to be extremely difficult for Geet to hold up on the pretense as if there is nothing wrong

between her and Maan and yet she does it

yes Maan now regrets for his every gesture against Geet but now he has to turn his regrets into

hope and trust for her and that will be difficult

though Geet always just wanted to get a glimpse of Maan and she has fallen him too but had to push that love way back and face the harsh reality before her

now with Maan's gestures about the function the only thought that comes to her mind is that he has to hold his pretense of a loving husband while in actual he is been truthful

Maan and Geet when both their eyes meet both are lost in their world while he craves her and wants her by his side she too has a part of her craving for his love but then she is always brought back to reality that he does not love her he hates her and this breaks her every time

when Ridzy and her father asked Darji if Geet could stay the weekend with Ridzy , Geet knew Maan's answer all before he could speak while he wanted to spend the weekend with Geet but also thought that she would like to be with her friends

when Ridzy again tells Geet that Maan could feed her both are in thoughts while he thinks how he never sat with her at any time to eat neither has he ever found out about her well being Geet thinks how much he hates her and her presence around him

the time Maan was admiring Geet she remembered he had mentioned to his Pari she looks more beautiful in Pink and Geet thinks he must be anger because she wore pink

though the unnecessary complications are coming between them but I feel its much needed

well it will make it much more difficult for Maan , but he needs to work hard for Geet he did scar her deeply so he is the only one that can heal her

though there are times that I feel bad and sad for Maan but I truly want him to journey the pain it will only be then that he will truly respect Geet and understand her pain understand her persona

now he feels the pain when she talks and its only him that understands how much she tries and cover her painful life but Maan needs to go through it

the weekend that Geet is away that weekend Maan should have a really bad weekend

its time that he pays too for his wrong deeds

but why is Maan taking the praise for allowing Geet to study he should actually feel guilty because the fact is he never knew anything about her neither he knew she is educated

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#690

Part 12 and 13

Both parts were beautifully written and you showed their every emotion in a best way. Love, fear, anxiety, desperation, turmoils everything was so perfect.😊👏👏

From where I am seeing Geet is the only one who suffered on every moment and that's what took on her health. 😭😭Which Ridzy's father noticed and even told to Maan. So now I am waiting to see what he will do into this matter as she loosing herself at every point. Not only in terms of health but on all aspects.

First that cousins and friends of her who teasing her non stop and she can't even voice out her pain. That will causing more pain and lack of expression will surely causing depression to her which lead to bad health.😭😭

All saw her outer beauty which also eventually falling. Though Ridzy and her mother doubted but still fails to catch the reason as Maan was so lovey dovey in front of them.

I mean it's really a torture. Her thoughts justified when she cribbing to God. How on earth she can believe that he came for her. The way he pushes her all the time roped a seed of fear.

Manjeet... Leave I don't wanna talk about it. 😡 😡 She have no work but to increase trouble in everyone's life and I don't think people like her will ever change. God bless her daughter in law...

Now coming to Maan. I know he wants to talk and clarify the things but somewhere I feels he still only thinking about himself. I am not saying he is not doing efforts. He is. In fact he even gave permission reluctantly which Geet took as willingly. But he should understand that fact. "JO BOYA HAI WAHI KATOGE"

How can he even think that he will just talk and everything goes fine... Lalallala... No dude it's not as simple as that now. It's a basic rule of science every action has a reaction. His actions leave deep impact on Geet.

Last prank which Rajji and Nandan played give a chance to both to feel each other but I too think they shouldn't do this. Nandan know how is her mother. Plus it's a small town. So any one can object.. they again put Geet is trouble which I really don't like. 😡😡

Geet is serious for job interview and asked helped for it already. So basically dekha jaye Geet jas set her ways to stay away from him. First night out with girls. Then morning me interview, uske baad weekends pe Ridzy k ghar...and that for whole 2 days...

Maan babu you gonna face more hard time to get in touch with your wife who lost all her colours and intrest in life...

Well i am not going in detail or else my comment become an update 😆😆

But yes I really wanna know how will he mend for all the mental torture she is bearing till now...

Thanks for double update... Waiting for next dear