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Posted: 7 years ago




Chapter 11
Awesome, emotional n wonderful update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Annie is guilty
Geet is hurt remembering her hurt hurtful words
Maan is admiring Geet
Also he want to give her something
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
very painful update
maan is waiting to get alone time with geet n talk n confess all
geet is fearing for blast from maan
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrastimaan

waiting for part 12

it part 11 you don't have any geet and maan scene



What do you mean there's no Geet and Maan scenes? The second half of the update is only on Maneet. I guess you haven't read it fully. I agree for PART 10 and I had clearly mentioned before posting it.

As time again, I have been mentioning, I am a busy family woman and Somehow I manage to give updates for my stories. Sometimes it gets delayed beyond expectation. Even Part 11 got delayed but I made sure I post it before I go to sleep and you can check the timing of the post by yourself. I posted it past mid night. You need to first learn to appreciate writer's efforts.

Sorry to say, but so far your comments are really annoying me. I really dont mean to be rude to anyone...and its my humble request dont force me to do so.. I have never ever seen you hitting "Like" button for my posts...and you always give one line comment and that too it will mention "Eagerly waiting for the next part". Anyways...ORP, is a complete different story...will continue my story in the way I have planned. If you feel Maneet scenes are less then its upto your thinking.

and coming to part 12, I repeat my self "PATIENCE REQUESTED". I cannot post my updates in a rush and hurry without any proper flow of story.




Edited by Vaidhumom - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
SORRY DEARIES...I CANNOT UPDATE WITH AN OFF MOOD AND CONFUSED MIND SET.😕

I AM ALMOST DONE WITH PART 12. HOPEFULLY WILL UPDATE TOMORROW. SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE.


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Posted: 7 years ago
gr8 part
hope geet and annie talk soon
cont.soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

SORRY DEARIES...I CANNOT UPDATE WITH AN OFF MOOD AND CONFUSED MIND SET.😕

I AM ALMOST DONE WITH PART 12. HOPEFULLY WILL UPDATE TOMORROW. SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE.



thanks for the note!

no problem

shall wait!

will read Part 11 and comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for updating!

Part 11

outstanding update! well written!

Prem senses Annie is upset! She is happy Maan is at HP and will bring Geet back!

glad Annie realises what Geet went and is going through! she was wrong not to trust Geet!! Geet had nobody except Shantima!

Annie and Prem feel guilty! I agree with Prem that they are also at fault!

while Maan has accepted Geet, she has lost faith in everything! Maan has a tough task ahead of him!

despite Annie's anger, Geet still cares for her! can understand Geet's hesitation to message Annie!

Geet's thoughts well portrayed! I agree with her! Maan shld have respected her! Hated that Annie cursed Geet!

Geet admires Maan and then reality hits her! she has no right on him! Maan has hurt so much! how will he take this pain away?

Maan lost in his Pari...but unable to say a word! oh no Geet's friends and family interrupt! they tease Maaneet unaware of the harsh reality!

at least Maan gets to know she likes mehendi! but sad seeing Geet lost interest in everything! this one year has changed her so much!

Geet scared of being near Maan!

Maan wants to give Geet the kundan necklace...but will she accept it?

update soon





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Posted: 7 years ago
Ani lost in her past
Prem que about her aloofness
She get to know about maans change
N was truly happy for geet
Prem still unaware of Vikram's deeds
Geet all lost in her thoughts
How she lived the past one year just by looking at maan
Now when maan is standing before her
She couldn't believe it
The teasings making both blush
Maan going to make geet wear the jewel given by dadi
Nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for next
When will u update

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