Maaneet New OS - Love Found In Hell - Page 5 (26-May-18)

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

great os
dumb maan but back on track
he kinda deserve that pain to understand his deep feeling
lovely story
and characters

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

mujhe bas ek objection hai
priya that too making maan understand.. I can't digest this fact ...priya on maaneet side 10th wonder ...
but love this story

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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Stupidity v innocence v unconditional love v guilt v pain v realisation v aur happiness v.. tadka of each and every emotion...very nyyc story...

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

interesting story
maaneet were friend but she always loves him
he was not sure about his feelings
finally he understood but it too late or may be not
they are together at the end
loved it

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Wow...loved this story so much...Maan is such a dumbo...Geet suffered so much, still she always lived her life to the fullest...Everyone knew about Maan's love for Geet except himself...Geet loved him selflessly...loved their confession...loved it so much...thank u 4 pm...

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Nice OS dear

Loved it!!

Loved the way you have incorporated Maaneetians into your writing's dear. Everyone except him was aware of him being in love with Geet alas he was the last person to acknowledge his love for Geet that time to he danced with Sam to make Geet jealous of him. 😡 This act of his pushed Geet into death bed. Glad that finally he confessed his love for Geet without any further delay.

Loved how you delineated all flavors of life into your writing's

Thanks for the pm!

:))