SS ~Love Waltz[8-10,Epilogue,Note-Pg 15,16]28 Jan *Complete*

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

ye hai kya?
matlab is it an ss??
ya os hai? tho gane q hai

jo bhi ho how are they connected to the songs?😕

aur phir i read the part on page 9

OMG you were brilliant there⭐️
it left me with such a bitter taste in my mouth i cant help cursing geet for being so blunt

na karne k polite ways bhi hote hai bhut she has such a sharp tongue

but point ye hai k maan's family and all were too fairytailish on the other hand the characters on geets family and share way of expressions wagaira were too real

aysa laga i was eavesdropping mere pados k ghar ki issues😆

Your Geet is Way too real for a fiction😉

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Part 4

He is falling for her. I loved the way his feelings have come in the last parts..like a delicate flower blooming slowly..his apprehension towards marriage and then his composed yet expressive gesture of happiness seeing it is actually her photo as the rishta..thanks to his Bhabhi for understanding his 'man ki baat'

ps - and I loved the whole setup..at times I like Maan as business tycoon, but I always like it more when he is not stereotyped with that tag..can so easily relate these characters to the people around from real life.

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Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

lovely update
Geet rejected maan

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Part 5

chhan se jo tuta..Maan ka dil.

everyone's advice is right at its place.
relating the status to the profession is something wrong on Geet's part, which I hope she will realize later, but more than looking down at him I think she just has bigger dreams and aspirations for her life which are placed at priority over other things.
so will they ever meet after her straightforward rejection...of course they will..😆

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Part 6

good that Geet is trying on her own too and her views are changing not only towards him but realizing her father's words..experience is the best teacher, and she got to know how good a person he is.
Maan ka jadoo chal gaya..musk and lilies part was too good..:)

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Thanks for making it so real
so beautifully penned down her character her thoughts everything is a resemble of a normal middle class girl
but loving the changes in her thought
she also learning many things with her mistake

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

love maan's character
a simple kind hearted man
in every step he is surprising geet without doing anything
loving it so much

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naanii.1389

@naanii.1389

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

So so nice.. enjoyed reading this so much. Geet gave me a good impression at first but turns out she was a bitch. But I can slowly see is realizing where she went wrong when she so arrogantly rejected him. Waiting for more

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Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

beautiful update
Geet judge him so wrong
Now very much impressed by Maan
Loved it

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
ye hai kya?
matlab is it an ss??
ya os hai? tho gane q hai

jo bhi ho how are they connected to the songs?😕

aur phir i read the part on page 9

OMG you were brilliant there⭐️
it left me with such a bitter taste in my mouth i cant help cursing geet for being so blunt

na karne k polite ways bhi hote hai bhut she has such a sharp tongue

but point ye hai k maan's family and all were too fairytailish on the other hand the characters on geets family and share way of expressions wagaira were too real

aysa laga i was eavesdropping mere pados k ghar ki issues😆

Your Geet is Way too real for a fiction😉

So glad to see you here 🤗

kya hai yeh? nahi pata 😆

aise hi baithe hue the and then this idea popped up in my head.

how are they connected to the songs? Not directly but some scene of the videos, or some lyrics is what that has inspired me to write it. like Aiyo Rama, if you watch the video, the girl misunderstands that the guy has stalked her when in reality he has come to return her keys. So, here in this ch on pg 9, Geet thinks that since she talked to Maan that day in the party, so he has come to her house with a rishta. 😊

Maan's family is a kind of family that I would like to see around me.

Although, few in number but there are such understanding and educated families.

Thank you for reading ❤️