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maaneetcraze

@maaneetcraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Extremely short ud
Shuru hui tum jaha me khtam hua * ye wala chakkar ho gya
Bt bt bt the ud is damn good
Geet 2 sach me dari hui he
I dn knw why i imagined amrita rao in the middle when the shyness was being described
U described it very nicely
As for maan * lol he is 😛
Thx 4 uding so soon
Waiting 4 next 2 see how this fling works
Since boys like this impish flirt maan eventually loves the attention shy girls like geet nd takes that as a challenge

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

thanks for updating again! Part 2 - splendid update! wonderfully written! can understand Geet's nervousness! Arjun teases Maan! but he says Geet is not his type! glad Arjun helped Maan! wow Geet makes Arjun her brother! update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Fantastic Chapter

Geet really finding it difficult to communicate with the students

while it also seems like Rahul , Arjun and Maan just make fun of her

Geet has spoken to arjun only because he resembles her brother

waiting to see what will actually happen

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Nice update dear

Liked it!!

Geet was still finding it difficult and nervous to communicate with others. Maan's presence was daunting Geet. Maan seems to be conceited and cocksure about him not falling for Geet. U never know what destiny holds for you !! Geet found a brother in Arjun as he resembles like her brother.

Waiting for the next update.

:))