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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

congrats on another story! lovely banner! intriguing prologue! nice cs

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

captivating update! superbly written! Maan is a musician. he hears a voice ... is it Geet? update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Congratulations on yet again another beautiful story

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Maan is a musician and he is loved by his fans but he finds that though he plays his piano to his best and is rewarded abundantly he still feel emptiness

hearing a beautiful voice and seeing a beautiful girl in his dreams he realizes it the same voice he heard after his performance

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Nefret19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Wowww:):):) An awesome start buddy:):):) And congrats on the new SS:):):) Its very intriguing...Maan appears to be very lonely and empty. Even though he is an accomplished musician...I wonder what is his past...and then appears his mysterious girl...a melody that he is seeing and hearing...a melody who will be his life...very very intrigued dearie:):):) All the best:):):)

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preetidhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Nice CS and Prologue

Maan is famous musician but is not happy and all alone in his life, first he heard a voice and then a girl in his dream who told him that he will get his happiness soon , Again he saw a girl who told him that she is the song of his melody and disappeared and Maan fainted, eagerly waiting for next

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Congrats for your new story..

Thanks for the update...

Thanks for the pm...

Interesting concept...

Nice characters sktech...

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Part 1...

Interesting...

Thanks for the update..

Thanks for the pm..

Continue soon...

Maan is a very successful musician but he is unhappy as there is no one to share his success... He is all alone...

He dreams a few glimpses of geet ... Or does he...

She is the melody of his songs...

But she disappears..

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nefret19
Wowww:):):) An awesome start buddy:):):) And congrats on the new SS:):):) Its very intriguing...Maan appears to be very lonely and empty. Even though he is an accomplished musician...I wonder what is his past...and then appears his mysterious girl...a melody that he is seeing and hearing...a melody who will be his life...very very intrigued dearie:):):) All the best:):):)

Thank u buddy 😃