~~~Maaneet 7th Wedding Anniversary~~~:Mod note Pg59 - Page 44

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Part 3

Awesome one.

Geet left and left an emptiness in his life. Her absence and her last words made him realized what he do in past one year. Hurting an innocent soul without any reason. Now when he realized he wants to meet her... Waiting for him to meet his wife as well as PARI...

Originally posted by: anu5

Ore piya

@Chapter 3

Emotive and interesting update Akka.

Liked it!!

Maan realised his demeanor towards Geet and was feeling guilty for behaving so. He was desperate to see her and apologize for his demeanor but alas he wasn't aware of the happenings taking place in his house and in his wife's place. His gulit stricken state made him realise his love and yearning for Geet in his life. Dadima's words and Shanti's gestures and taunts discerned him about his faults. Glad that he decided to meet Geet and was repenting for his deeds.

Emotions well penned.

Looking forward to the next update

:))

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

O re piya ...

My most fav os in this thread ...

Well penned

Maan is in love with his pari when he had saw her near his farmhouse and searching her like a maniac .but because of dadi he had to marry geet... Twist in the tale is he doesnt know that geet is his pari .. Maan in his frustration insulted geet and hurted her as he thought that its all her fault . He even blamed her and taunted her as anpad gawar .. Thats so sad .. Geet took all his words but never retorted to him .. Geet started liking him or probably loving him .. But man hurted geet to such an extent ki vo toot chuki hain 😭

Only shantimaa supported her in her grief .. She cant even say this to dadima as she is scared of her ill health ... So geet went back to hosiarpoor to give her exams and also to attend her sisters marriage . She even returned all the jewelery to dadima ..lagta hain geet wapis nahin anewali hain ...

So now maan is feling guilty after one year .. Geets words echoed in his mind and he cant stop thinking abt geet .. He even forgot pari and started to think abt geet , her voice , her bak bak and all .. Dadis indifference hurted him and he came to know that geet went to hosiarpoor ..he is hurt as she didnt asked him .. But he is the one who always throw her out of his room and insulted like anything .. Shanti maan showed him the reality and now he is feeling that he loves his wife .. I am sure that his guilt will increase when he come to know that geet is his pari ...

Totally awesome . I am just loving it .. Waiting for next parts ..😳

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for updating!! O re Piya Part 3 - stupendous update! wonderfully written! Maan feels guilty for what he did 2 Geet but its too late! glad Shantima told Dadi! Dadi;s anger justified! I am surprised Maan confessed to dadi what he did! Maan misses Geet and finds solace when she sleeps on her bed! liked the bond btwn Geet and Shantima! Maan awed hearing her voice! Shantima rude 2 Maan but takes care of him! Maan missing Geet! Shantima tells Maan all abt Geet? great that Maan decided to after Geet but will she forgive him? it will not be easy 4 her! Maan will now realise she is his Pari! please update next asap

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Thanks you for all your lovely commments dear 🤗

Next part will be up by me soon 😳

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

HELLO EVERYONE...

I'm LAKSHMI (VAIDHUMOM) with you. I'm Author of O RE PIYA

I wanted to post this note yesterday but couldnt ...

FIRSTLY ...THANK YOU PRIYA AND RAKHIE FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT.🤗. I am not at all tired of praising your hardworks...you people have done an excellent job 👏

THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOU WHO HAVE LOVED O RE PIYA..🤗


Coming to my updates, I am really sorry for being slow...My story is ready in mind but I want to make sure there's proper flow of words and emotions...that's why I am taking little more time...Also, I am taking time out of my family and 2 kids...

My apologies to Rakhie and Priya for the delays in sharing my updates.

My sincere apologies to the readers to keep you waiting...but I will not disappoint you...there are only about 3 more parts to go and I will share one at a time..

My sincere apologies for all the creatives and writers who's stories I have to yet read and comment ...I will do it one by one 😳

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR ALL YOUR HUMBLE AND KIND SUPPORT FOR O RE PIYA🤗

PART 4 is on the way and will be done soon.

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

HELLO EVERYONE...

I'm LAKSHMI (VAIDHUMOM) with you. I'm Author of O RE PIYA

I wanted to post this note yesterday but couldnt ...

FIRSTLY ...THANK YOU PRIYA AND RAKHIE FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT.🤗. I am not at all tired of praising your hardworks...you people have done an excellent job 👏

THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOU WHO HAVE LOVED O RE PIYA..🤗


Coming to my updates, I am really sorry for being slow...My story is ready in mind but I want to make sure there's proper flow of words and emotions...that's why I am taking little more time...Also, I am taking time out of my family and 2 kids...

My apologies to Rakhie and Priya for the delays in sharing my updates.

My sincere apologies to the readers to keep you waiting...but I will not disappoint you...there are only about 3 more parts to go and I will share one at a time..

My sincere apologies for all the creatives and writers who's stories I have to yet read and comment ...I will do it one by one 😳

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR ALL YOUR HUMBLE AND KIND SUPPORT FOR O RE PIYA🤗

PART 4 is on the way and will be done soon.

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

I have read all your comments dear... 🤗thank you so much...I will be back soon with PART 4