Amorous Elixir!#T2*UPDATED CH16@Pg46 [CH14,15@Pg7,37]

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chap 16

Part 2

awesome gif 👏

fantastic update! excellently written!

nice seeing Maan direct! hated that she mocks Maan but can understand why!

enjoyed this sarcastic Maan! seems like he used sarcasm to hide his feelings! but she knows him very well.

she cares for him so much!! Maan's thoughts going in the wrong direction! he ever ceases an opportunity to taunt her!

why are Maaneet running away from their feelings?

Maan was so rude but glad he apologised! Gosh Geet playing matchmaker! of cos Maan is not interested!

enjoyed Maaneet's banter...

but Maan's statement shocks Geet! it indeed reveals everything...

will Maaneet confess?

Oh well!! Ye comment hain ki question ka pitara!! hahah!! Just kidding!! 😆

Thanks for liking this GIF as well and the writing!!

Maan and sarcasm - Isn't he always sarcastic?? And he indeed does use sarcasm to hide his true feelings!!

Geet - glad you said that!! Geet indeed cares for Maan deeply!!

Underline - Red >> Because they are immature, at teen and stupid?? 😕😆🤣 Look at their age!! This is the time when the difference between attraction and love, adolescences, childhood everything just gets mixed up hence so much confusion arises!!

Blue >> Of course they will confess!! But when that is the thing!! 😉

Glad that you liked their banter!! thanks for your lovely comment!! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Fantabulous update
Maan expecting n probing Geet to confess her lov buyer get being her does not do that
Super interesting precap Pari kissing Maan in dreams and narration to Geet who is super angry at that
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Continue soon

Hi dearie,

I am happy to know that your liked the update!!

Well no, Maan was not wanting geet to confess her LOVE for him! he just wanted her to show her care just as she used to do back at their childhood!!

Thank you very much for the feedback sweets!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Precap 2

lovely precap!

ahh jealous Geet...

this reminded of GHSP and when Pari entered the show!

update asap

Ohh that was my intention!! Reminded you GHSP?? But this Geet will be slightly more J!! 😉

Shall update when the target is achieved!!

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: love2_soma
very good geet...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Thank you so much sweets!!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: jasbirkaur85197
Wow fabulous update ipti...thanks for update waiting for next update dear

Hey Jasbir, how are you dear??

Glad that you liked the update!

Yeah shall update soon! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: jasbirkaur85197
Thanks for pm too 😊

My pleasure sweets!! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: fict
Loved the update. Everything just flowed naturally. Maan's dad turned out to be a nice person after all and his bonding with Geet was awesome.After last part I was bit skeptical about him but his behavior with Geet was a pleasant surprise. Maybe he and Maan have a clash of egos with both being similar in nature. Geet 's care fro Maan soothed his wounded heart but he is still hurt. Hopefully they will resolve their mu soon.
Each of your stories is unique and loving them more with each update. Thanks for sharing.

Hi,
I am so so much happy with this comment!! It means a lot because of a few things you have mentioned!! Glad that you noticed that everything flowed naturally!! 😳

Thank you for liking Geet and Maan's father's bond!! And you are absolutely right on the fact of ego clash!!

Their MU - Sweets, they will solve this one but then a few new one will arise!! This story will have feisty chemistry between them!!

Underline - This means a lot for me coming out from a veteran reader like you so thank you so very much...I do not know your name so would just call you with your username fIct!! 🤗

Thank you once again for this lovely and warm comment wrapped into the words of encouragement!!❤️

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: jasika08
Awesome update
Love it
Waiting for next update

Thank you so very much sweets!!

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Okay!! Maan's father isn't that bad as he seemed to be earlier..
He was good with geet as well.. In fact he adored her..
Here I had thought him to be the antagonist of the story..
Geet seems to be quite close to him as well..
How easily she made him calm & all happy happy..
No one can say he was a boiling lava a few minutes ago..
Geet has quite an effect on Khurana males I believe..
Nice choice of song.. goes with his feelings well..
This is the first time I saw maan so rude with geet..
Geet never thinks before speaking??
Maan's hurt was so evident in his words..
But her little concern worked like magic on him..
So much jealousy from holding her hands.. yet he says no romantic feelings involved!!
seriously!! geet is really trying to match making for maan?? how much more ignorant can she be??
Shameless maan.. I like it..
It would be really entertaining if both pari & raghav see them kissing..
Lovely update.. enjoyed reading..

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#260

Really interesting precap.. first one showed maan's temper cooled down..
Next one about pari's fantasy.. Finally getting to see a jealous geet.. Hope she tries to find the reason for her jealousy..

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