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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

will wait for next part
thnx


Aww sorry to keep you waiitng.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neasya

awesome start dear...

would love to read further please continue soon and thank you for the pm...


Thanks dear. I need to thank the person who is sweet enough to send the pm. please, thank that person. I have no credit in it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Geetdrashti

wow tomorrow update time
eagerly waiting


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

one more day for an update! 😃


Its updated😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on your story


Thank you so much dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Sorry dear, it took me bit long to write. Juust finished another story and it was very emotional. It took me time to switch to light mood
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow what a Mind Blowing Start

Thank you so much dear😳...Hope it will continue to be good.

Geet comes to Khurana offices to meet Dev's mother but instead Maan comes down to meet her

Destiny aka writer playing a part😆

and when he sees her instantly he is captivated by her beauty but comes to his senses realizing that the girl is Naintara and wants to marry Dev only for his wealth.

Yes, he fell for her on first sight

so Maan decides to insult Geet while she embarrasses him telling him that she loves him and now she will leave taking his money as that very money is for their love symbol their baby and poor Maan is shocked and appalled by her talks and worst now his staff thinks he is some lose character

He had it coming😈

Geet on the other hand lies to Naintara telling her that Dev is dead and the bakers son is still interested in her
the next day Geet comes home only to find the entire Khurana family at her home with both Maan and Dev
eagerly waiting for the next chapter

I updated, hope you like it😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

Updated on schedule😳😆...so cute😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

this Geet is funny.. i like her.
how she quickly changed her tune to saying Maan was paying her off.. loved her acting..
how did Man end up coming next day?


Yes, she is bubbly and not so sweet😉😆...you will know after reading second chapter😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08

Nice update

Waiting for next update.


Thanks dear. I updated second chapter.

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