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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1041

@Twisted True Love

Beautiful banner

Interesting preface and fab Character sketch.

Interesting start !!

Liked it. Well penned.

Maan's parents intro and characterization was similar to that of typical parents. Maan's father was concerned about his son's future whilst his mother was in favor of his son's attitude and behavior. Maan proposed pari and confessed his love for her but she rejected him apropos to his languid deportment and his dependency on his father for fiance whilst Maan was left heartbroken.

Looking forward to the continuation of the story!

Thanks for the story dear writer!!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1042

@Locked cabin doors

Fab one shot

Interesting title.

Liked it!! Crisp writing.

Maan was in quandary to see Geet's weird demeanor. Maan's monologue was well penned , depicting Maan and Geet's relationship from boss and employee to husband and wife. Whilst Geet was in attempts to fulfill Maan's fantasy and desire. Maan was surprised with Geet's gestures but on getting hint he acted along to make his fantasy come true. No wonder Geet is a dutiful wife to Maan and both are irrevocably in love with each other. Loved their little dramatic self and their play as boss and secretary. Cute ending!

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Thanks for the OS dear writer!!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1043

@Gabar is back

Fun loving OS

Liked it !!

Maaneet are in Kashmir for their honeymoon. Maan wanted to spend his time with his wife as the ambiance added it's charms to his desires whilst his FIL was his enemy. His FIL constantly distrubed his time with Geet and kept on calling them up to cause hindrance to their romance. Geet's father was too possessive for Geet that he hated the fact that Geet's love was shared by Maan hence vowed to spoil Maan's romantic time with Geet. Finally Geet in frustration and annoyance switched off their mobile phones due to her father's intrusion but her father's never give up attitude made him to call on their landline making Maaneet go livid. Lol !! No wonder Maan named his FIL as Gabar. Definitely Gabar was back. Enjoyed it!

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Thanks for the OS dear writer!!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1044

@Move On

Emotional yet happy OS

Liked it !!

Maan was down to memory lane and cherishing the time he spent with Geet. Every nook and corner and things of their paradise their house remainded him of their happy times and Geet's cute antics but it was the time that they decided to move on in their life and had filed divorce too. The particular dates in the calendar got his attention and remembered their first fight were he misunderstood Geet. Finally Maans brain light up with some sense and revelation. Geet was pregnant and the baby brought new zeal to their otherwise life as a ray of hope.

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Thanks for the OS dear writer!!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1045

@Caged in my arms

Nice TS

Liked it!! Well penned.

Geet was writhing and lamenting in Maan's arms and had to witness her love Rajeev bring tormented by Maan's mens. Maan was in love with Geet and desired to make her his. He was possessive for her and her love for Rajeev made him insane that he had to blackmail Geet to get married to him in response to Rajeev's life. Geet to save her love's life agreed to marry Maan reluctantly. Even Geet's parents disowned her as she rejected to get married to Rajeev causing shame to them and their reputation whilst Maan played his game as a Knight who came in rescue of the damsel and her parents reputation. Maan showered her with his love pushing Geet to give into her amorous self. She was in dilemma!!? At the end Geet accepted her fate.

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Thanks for the story!!

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1046

Originally posted by: priya_21

maine kaha
aur kb kiya ye

😡

JI AAP EK BAAR KHUDH KHI STORIES READ KAREN

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1047

Originally posted by: .MishtyLove.
Mai dinner Karne gayi thi tab

Mein sasural gayi thi...

Kal hi aayi wapas😳

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1048

Originally posted by: .MishtyLove.
Yes..😛

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1049

Originally posted by: piya27
Thank you thank you so much for updating the story FLOWER BASKET

from all the stories that you all have contributed i loved each and everyone but this touched my heart

Am waiting eagerly for the next parts and Plzz don't forget to pm me wen you update next

dear when we get next part surely i update my UPDATE THREAD and you can check from here