Maaneet SS: Red Love - Page 5

nice update...Maaneet met each other for the first time in holi...both gets lost in each other...do they know each other from before...so Geet is Maan's enemy's daughter...they dance passionately...waiting for the next update...thank u 4 pm...

Awesome very nice

Superb update dear

Maaneet holiday scenes are romantic and passionate. Nice song sequence.

awesome part
both are enjoying each other company

Awesome update dear..
Beautiful pics..
Loved it..

Wao wao it's romantic love love it i am big fan of your writing please soon write on tanshi too please please whenever you have time.
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Part 3:
The boy who watch Maaneet is really angry...
Rajveer: how dare dushman boy enter in our place ..
Maan is full drunk state ...he was lost on Geet..
He want to see Geet ...

Maan friend: bhai lets go ..
Maan who was lost on Geet..
He smiling & seeing Geet in front of him..
She came sit beside him..
Maan caress her face & pull her to kiss..
He start kissing..
Suddenly he got slap..
Maan came in senses.
He was kissing his friend ..
Other friends laughing baldy..
Friend: What happens to u Maan came on man..
Maan: I am going crazy ...I want to meet her & see her..
Friend who Maan kiss said: Yes go & meet her otherwise our izzat in danger.. Other friends laugh..
Maan without any second wait & rush to her..
Geet was to lost on Maan thought..

Geet mother: Geet beta plz add sugar in tea..'

Geet took salt & add on tea..
Geet mother saw & said..'
Mother: Are u crazy u add salt insist of sugar..
Geet thought she saying add more..
Geet look at her mother & smile though she was so angry..
Geet kiss on her cheeks & rush to room..
Mother: really strange girl..
Geet went in window balcony..
Suddenly she hurt with stone..
She look here & their saw Maan standing down..
Maan wink her ..Geet blush Maan wave hand & Geet give fly kiss..
Maan was get mad & fall back...Geet start laughing..
Maan cant wait more...Maan climb up & Geet pull him inside in her room.. Geet locked door..
Geet rush &hug him..
Maan hold her & spin in happiness...

Geet: u came to meet me don't u feel afraid ?
Maan: Naa Why I feel afraid I came to meet my life..
Geet keep her foot on Maan foot and wrap hands around his neck..
Maan smile and hold her wrist..
Both gazing each other
Geet: So I am your life ?
Maan: any doubt My lady..I love You..
Maan caressing her face ..
Geet hug him & close her eyes..

Geet: I love you too..

Maan cup her face& move towards her lips..

Both lost on passionate kiss..
Don't know how long they were lost..
Finally move apart because of lacking breath..
Maan hold Geet in arms & drop her in bed & lay beside her ..
Geet lay on his chest..
Maan caressing her..
Geet push him & jump on him..
Maan gazing her..
Geet: Why u gazing me like this ?Am I so beautiful?
Geet wink him..
Maan: yes really beautiful like nothing..
Geet: I don't trust u..
Geet smile playfully..
Maan: don't trust me just marry me..
Maan smile michiefly..
Geet: ok fine lets go to marry...
Maan: acha ..
Geet: chalo give me your number..
Maan give her his card..
Maan pull her & about to kiss..
Geet door start knocking..
Geet: coming..
She hold Maan hand & drag her to balcony..
Geet peck his lips &wave him bye..
Maan sign for call..
Geet smile..

Awesome part