Mannet ss :Mystical myth / pg26 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Btw yar if am not wrong there is 1 ongoing story with same name as myth
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prologue is superb
Waiting 4 part 1
Alsp plz ud sympathy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on new ss loved it so get found a man in injured state she is princess with goldden heart and took man to her place to help him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: solaceMG

Btw yar if am not wrong there is 1 ongoing story with same name as myth

hi dear
I just checked yes there is story with name myth but not a supernatural one😛. This one is purily an imagination not inspired by any serial/movie .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rpian

hi dear

I just checked yes there is story with name myth but not a supernatural one😛. This one is purily an imagination not inspired by any serial/movie .


Ha yar ho sake 2 title change karlo kuch aur rakhlo
Looking 4ward next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats!!

Can't wait to read this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: solaceMG


Ha yar ho sake 2 title change karlo kuch aur rakhlo
Looking 4ward next

i'm too bad in chosing titles u can suggest😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi all before we proceed further i want to clear somethings . First the story belongs to 21st century . Secondly i'm not posting character sketch specially maan . But will clear characters in update itself .


Chapter 1



A maid come inside chamber of geetanjali mother ie queen rajeshvari .


Bowing her head in from of queen she say

M- ranisaa vo princess come back from temple but

R- but what?
M- vo guards found an injured man on the way .
Rajeshvari nodded and order them to Send doctors for his tratment . Saying so she went toward coridor to check him


...

Geetanjali was moving too & fro waiting for doctors to treat him . When one of the nurse rush outside for needed medicines .
Geetanjli stop her
G- how is he?
N- princess we can't say anything he is uncoinsious and doctors are unable to stop his bleding .
G- do something fast
Nurse nodded and rush outside

...
In aashram

Rajguru open his eyes . Coming out of his meditation but he was tensed sensing someone near him
When he hear a voice
" vo mera h kuch nhi ho skta use

G- Galatfaime b tumhe he replied with streaness in his voice he need to go

"itni jaldi nhi
He hear again

Makhan knocked the door causing his attention to divert & then he feel none
G- come makhan
M- guruji
Vo maharaj is here as u want
G- I'm coming .
...

Doctors look toward each other worried he is sinking . His heartbeat decresing gradualy .
Some moments more and then may be he ...

D- we stopped bleeding but i don't think

Second doctor nodded but still say
Let's try our best .

We just have an option left to give him schok

First one nodded
Then they press machine on his heart but no movement

His breathing getting slower & slower

They tried again

Geetanjali all the while praying outside the chamber . As a princess it's her duty . She hasn't seen his face but still pulling towadd him


Doctors tried once again and this time he open his eyes

Both the doctors got scared immidatly as they saw his eyes golden?
How is it possible?
His eyes were bright golden
They get back immidatly

And noted machine to beep

His heart start beating with an irregular pace his fist clencth immiadatly and his bright golden eyes scaring them

They run outside immidatly

Geetanjaly was confused as doctor when come outside seems scared

G- is he fine ?

Doctors look at each other face not able to answer .


D- vo he ?
G- what happen?

When they both not answer for further minutes

She herself step inside his room

Only to find his eyes closed and his heart beating now with normal pace .

First time she see him that moment
He look calm & composed .

His clothes was torn when they found him but looking at his face she can say he us not someone who belong to a poor family .

His presence was spellbounded

Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da update! nice update! well written! A man is found injured! Princess Geet worried and prays 4 him! they try to save him and is shocked seeing his golden eyes! Geet sees him! update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Nice update
Maan is some angel or demon/werewolf it seems like that
Waiting 4 next
Edited by solaceMG - 7 years ago

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