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NOTE : (No update until 50 response comments and sufficient likes- target page is 100)

Ok so here comes the key chapter of Predestined!!
I know it's a quite expected one for few which from a long time was due! Yet with a slight bit of twist! Have a little faith on me!😳

Also we are on 50th chapter!!

Phew!! A long journey!⭐️

Thanks to all those who has contributed into this story of Maaneet!🤗❤️

I am hoping that you all would be continuing to be as supportive as you always have been!

Finally we are into the main plot!! Now the game begins!!!

You know me what i always say going to state the same this time as well, PLEASE IGNORE THE ERRORS!!😆😛
Thanks!!

Now did you get the real meaning of the SNEAK PEEK?? 😉😉😉
Also now you know why the story is called PREDESTINED!!

Thanks to these sweeties for liking last chapter
shrutisth, rahifahmida, apeda, Dograshivangi, ferdouz,

Songs used in this
>> HASI BAAN GAYE (Hamari adhuri kahani)
>> Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi (Ghajni)

Thanks a lot for reading and you may scroll now!




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PRECAP : His warm lips slightly touched her trembling ones and he let their moments flow by being like that.

"I love you..." his lips slowly rubbed hers while speaking those sacred words scorning her more!


Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Reserved for SNEAK PEEK~




Sneak Peek~~~~~~~~~~~~


"Geet...Jaan...Let me explain once please...Shona Pleaseee???" his talk got cut in the middle, "Maine bhi kaha tha? Baas ek mauka manga tha aapse..." She clenched his waistcoat, "Srif ek mauka..." Putting his palm on her lips he didn't let her finish and trailed his misery again, "Toh tum woh galti maat karo naa jo maine ki hain...Main bura hoon, kiya kehti ho tum mujhe? Buddhu..Haan. buddhu hoon...Main..." Smoothing his fingers on her hands which were clutching his waistcoat collars furiously, to answer his caressing she immediately jerked him off shooting glares with her teary eyes, pricking his heart with her each flowing passion!

"Khabardaar...Agar aap mere paas bhi aaye toh...Main toh pregnant hoon naa...Woh bhi kisi aur ke bacche kee..." Hearing her heart wrenching words he shut his eyes close in agony, "Aap pe daag laag jayega agar mujhe choo liya aapne..." she wiped her tears fiercely, "Pata nahi main kyun yaha khade hoke bakwas sunn rahi hoon aapki..." He saw her going away and how could he let her leave before putting away a good fight from his side.

Pulling her close into his arms he restricted her hands and spoke again, "Choo toh liya hain maine tumhe... Aur jindegi bhar baas tumhe aapna banana hain mujhe...Chahe aab kitna bhi gussa ho tum mujhpe..." He paused briefly before imploring softly,
"Shona...Tum gussa karo mujhpe...Mujhe maaro...I deserve all of your anger... Now I can see all the love behind your cute anger... Jaan..." Saying so he fell on his knees while touching the ground, hugging her stomach dearly, Making her stupefied for the umpteenth time with his mellow tender approaches!!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Part 49
My heart goes for maan in this update ...his pain , his emotions , his craving for geet made me forget all the awful things he said to geet ... Its good that dadi is with maan otherwise his position would be very bad .. I am in shock .. Ithna bada shock .. Pinky said all those things in shopping mall on dadis insistence and dadi sending all those recordings to maan .. Ohhh myyy goddd ... This is fab ... Basically you are revealing everything one by one ... Hats off 👏 i am awed didu ... So even pinky doesnt know the whereabouts of geet ... I loved this one alottt this sentence made my heart flutter "he flared her wings by the abhorrent wildfire fueled with his greivious experience " this sentence is ringing in my ears till i fini shed reading ... you are such a brilliant writer ..👏. Maan maan ... Cant even see maan in such state didu ... Its really depressing for me .. His suffering from childhood made him into this ... Thats soo sad that his mother left him when he was ten years ...and after sameera betrayal which is till unknown to us made him to hate women ... But after the entry of geet he changed his view and when he started trusting women this happend .. So we cant even blame him ... Its because of the things he faced ...ohh now got everything clear so that reports was of mrs arora when geet admitted her in hospital this mistake happend ...
Even geet is suffering a lott .. She is controling herself and questioning maan that y he didnt believed her ... Meera discarded her mobile and the thing which is left is memory card of geet which has maaneets selfies and the song sung by maan ...geet is trying to hate him but still unable to ..the way she is inserting memory card and listening his voice and looking their pics really sad .. . Both souls are suffering .. Geets mind want to hate him to the core but still her heart beats for him ... Ohh godd its just a dream .. For a second i thought it to be real ... 😕 The emotions are very well explained didu ... I am able to feel each and everything ... You are truly an amazing writer ...
I loved each and every bit of this chapter didu ... Really this one is fab ... Lovee youu soo much back to back updates ... 😳
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Ohhh myyy goddd ... What is this ??? Shock pe shock ?? First arjun , then dev , then finally MAAN the boss and the owner of axle company ??? 😲 Okay let me clarify point by point ... I dont know but i have a clear doubt that this miss aggarwal is sameera and the middle aged man geet went to take some signs is maans father ... I am not sure but lagtha hain mujhe ... Even arjun works there .. Basically meera suggested arjun to provide job for her frnd but even he doesnt know that its geet ... Both are equally shocked .. Geet is successful in avoiding arjun ... I didnt get this miss boss ... She is suspicious .. The work she gave to geet on second day is creating doubts in my mind ... Hope this doesnt create any problms for geet ... So geet is transferred to other branch and she loved her environment .. She is fooling herself ... She can never ever forget maan ... She is just assuring herself that she would forget him when she becomes busy in work ... She saw dev ?? Dev works there ... Omgg thats the reason arjun and dev were caught together ... Does arjun know abt the awful things done by dev to geet ??? Now i must say this one is not at all expected ... Not at all expected by me .. I dont know whether anyone expected this one or not but i never expected this twist ... Kamaaal ka twist hain yaar sach bolu toh i was shocked , surprised , happy , sad and what not ??? I am feeling every emotion now ... 😳😉 Just loved the entry of maan ... Must say yaar this one is fabulous ...no words to say ... Mindblowing .. Words kam pad jayenge shayadh ... Now phir se maan boss and geet secretary ... Ohh godd ... The name very well suits now ... 😃 She got three shocks within two days by three persons who held very important place in her life ... This must be a big shock for geet as well as all the readers of pd ... Ohhh finally she is not dreaming ... He touched her and wiped away her tears ... 😳 Everyone are in shock by the behaviour of maan ... Now i understood y u have mentioned this to be the crucial chapter of pd ... This one chapter is capable to increase our expectations and turn the tables ... This whole chapter lifted predestined to top ... Amazing didu ... And gifs ... What to say abt them ... They are fannntassstiiiccc ... A big thanks and lots of kissed for youuu didu ... I am sooo excited to type my comment for this chapter ... Love you diduuu ... Thankss alottt for this beautiful chapter ... Next one is most awaiting confrontation .. But i am more excited for dev and geets confrontation ... Cant wait didu ...plzzz update sooonnn ... Once again luv you for this amazing chapter ...
Edited by Roopa_1 - 7 years ago
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Omg omg omg was waiting 😃
First of all thanks a lot for updating ipti
Read a lot of ffs but a sudden beautiful twist like this has never seen
Today I would like to comment on your writing more
Few people are writer by their breath i think you r 1 of them
Here everyday a lot of stories gets updated bt everyday i wait 4 this thread 2 get updated
Mene pehle bhi kha hai this is my favorte story n thnx 4 taking it into some other level
I have never read such strong complicated and excellent plot. Twist pe twist n so much awesme
Everything is coming altogether
This story is a treat 2 read. Beautiful. Just beautiful. Thank you so much iptida for writing this fabolous concept. Brilliant and so much unique
It might seem usual but a very very unique story!
I am so much happy with 2days update that I can keep giving u res after res
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also waiting... what abt MP?????
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Originally posted by: anu5

@Chapter 45

Heartwrenching update dear
Liked it!! Well penned.
Maan in his rage and misunderstanding hurled accusions on Geet without letting her to justify thyseld fully to clear the air. Guess who ever would have been in Maan's place would be hurt to hear Geet's one side convo and the words she uttered owing to the person's past experience. Maan's scars from his past and reality of world which he faces through his job commitments made him believe that Geet is betraying him. Geet was devastated that Maan believed in her words and fake report and started to mistrust her and her loyalty towards their relationship. She tried to explain him but he wasn't in tight frame of mind to hear her out and taunts her and say she is acting. Geet was hurt beyond but alas his words of accusions were stabbing her and piercing her heart out. When she brought talked about his past , Maan yet again accused her. His rational mind is coulded with his mistrust on her and was ready to set her fear. Geet was shattered and totally broken down to witness his mistrust on her despite she truly loved him from bottom of her soul.
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Hi Anu,
👏 What a beautiful comment!!The analysis is lovely!

Underline - He didn't care about that report, he was still in a processing zone! So no he was more on the emotional betrayal side! Next updates shall clear his point of views!

Thanks a ton for this extraordinary feedback!! Loved it! ❤️

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