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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Marium has guest over house...

She's busy with him little mischief cousin now...

He has exam over this month and he has too many ways to escape his studies...

So had to be with him...

Unless like meri nazar hati or durghatna ghati...😆

Last night my brother tried a lot but he's really naughty So need someone strict with him..

Marium is really strict teacher from very early even with my students... 🤣

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#152

So busy will be now... only late night can came over here

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Part 74 - Wow...Superb update. Seeing the progress in geet my heart is at peace. Loved the title. She was still not sure that maan chose her. Liked how pooja always supported her and advised her time to time. Pooja pushed her to meet maan and happy that she acted on that.

Maan tried to avoid that but geet was pestering him to tell the reason for working in his room. And after knowing that she herself got lost in those words. Ufff ... geet bohot kuch sikhna baki hai. He can't stop reminding sweet memories of them in study. Oh...he so much misses her. hope geet soon comes back to him.

Who is this big dark doe eyes. New entry for kabir. But really I missed kabir though. Uski bhi to love story bana do.

Finally geet landed in NYC. So surprise for ana & maan. Ana is really happy to see her at KE. She was screaming happily and forgot about aayush on the line.

Oh...why you stopped at there. Where is maan. Very eager to see his reaction.

Lovely Precap. Already imagining them in the study spending time with each other.

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Amazing, lovely n wonderful update

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Continue soon please... do write as you have planned dear

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Neethu Raj

@neetr91

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Want their relationship to flourish like two beautiful individuals in love.

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Is your laptop fixed? How old is it?

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#158

this is wat love all abt...i dont believe in physical intimacy ...maaneets love is divine wch makes this FF Outstanding n Unique ...this is da only reason m mad abt this FF...go as u planned aishu...dont spoil da vry essence of this FF plz...

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Oh man, this wait is soo hard.

Hope you get paid time off to write or your work gets so easy that you finish 8-9 hrs work in just 4 hrs.

Kanha, apni bacchi ko shakte dena

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primafacie

@primafacie

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#160

As a reader, I wholeheartedly appreciate the fact that you are taking the pains of trying to meet the reader's expectations and hence ask their opinion about "the idea of romance".

Well, I too, am going to express my opinion for your consideration but before that allow me to make an earnest request. You, the author, conceived the idea of this story and its numerous characters. Why ask the readers expectations now. One it would snatch your freedom as a writer and second it might risk the story losing its true essence. So, please stick to your freedom as an author and take the story forward the way you always wanted to!

Now, coming to the question that you posed. Well, every love story is unique and this, of course, is no different. It is very difficult to pick one of the two options right away since life has too many grey areas. Thus, although I'd pick the first option of two individuals falling in life we still cannot rule out physical intimacy completely. I agree that the characters aren't teenagers who would just pounce on each other but we also cannot afford to ignore the fact that physical intimacy (read kiss) is also an expression of love and longing. Words do fail you at times. This is more so apt here since the two have been away from each other for quite some time now and it is only natural for them to feel that sense of belonging when they meet.

This is my take on it. But, I'd still urge you not to get influenced and take it forward the way you envisioned :)

Edited by primafacie - 7 years ago