Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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Doracake

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Hey nice concept

Teen romance

Nice update

Waiting for Next

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Iptida

oh man! phir se dara diya meko!😲

Hehehheh

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@jssood

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

very nice

maan and geet know each other from preschooling

in that age geet consol him

andgive her chocolate

maan remember geet

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Commented 😳😃

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thank you so much baby! 😃

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Rahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Fantabulous start

Loved the cute conversation of mini Maaneet

Current scenario Maan is all evolved from a cry baby to a popular chap but Geet is still naive

Maan knows her name and also answers Riyana for her

Very very interesting do update frequently buddy...

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Wonderful start 👏

WOW...with prologue I was wondering how a classmate like Maan remembers Geet the one who is odd one out

Loved their chemistry which is in hush bush now...Geet has hidden feelings for him and Maan has soft corner as she had behaved good during his KG days...and also her brother is his close friend. Moreover, likes her attitude of being herself.

Loved Geet's personality portrayed here...even with her specs, with her uniform which is 2 size bigger than her own size, and her so called behenji tag...SHE IS ADORABLE.

Maan rejected that glamorous girl? Good 😊. He does have a soft corner for Geet but I guess as a good friend. Loved it when he supported Geet in front of that Glamorous queen...but still not sure if he too intends happiness by getting Geet Teased? May be will know it in future updates.

Oh no...they had a fight recently? What was it? Waiting to know.😛

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom
Wonderful start 👏
WOW...with prologue I was wondering how a classmate like Maan remembers Geet the one who is odd one out

Loved their chemistry which is in hush bush now...Geet has hidden feelings for him and Maan has soft corner as she had behaved good during his KG days...and also her brother is his close friend. Moreover, likes her attitude of being herself.

Loved Geet's personality portrayed here...even with her specs, with her uniform which is 2 size bigger than her own size, and her so called behenji tag...SHE IS ADORABLE.

Maan rejected that glamorous girl? Good 😊. He does have a soft corner for Geet but I guess as a good friend. Loved it when he supported Geet in front of that Glamorous queen...but still not sure if he too intends happiness by getting Geet Teased? May be will know it in future updates.

Oh no...they had a fight recently? What was it? Waiting to know.😛

Hey, thanks a lot for your wonderful comment.
Umm the liking between Maaneet - well Geet does not like Maan...Yet... Or more precisely.Now!
Maan- Who knows?he could be deeply in love with her... Still conceal it well under his rugged self... Or actually loath her 😉

It's a quite basic story just a tinge bit of twist!
Loved you comment dear. Hope to have your support throughout! 😳

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hey, thanks a lot for your wonderful comment.
Umm the liking between Maaneet - well Geet does not like Maan...Yet... Or more precisely.Now!
Maan- Who knows?he could be deeply in love with her... Still conceal it well under his rugged self... Or actually loath her 😉
It's a quite basic story just a tinge bit of twist!
Loved you comment dear. Hope to have your support throughout! 😳

Oh...thanks for your further reply and once again All the best...Will make it a point to read and comment further. 😊

By the way, I just completed reading PD...will post my comments soon.😳

You are an amazing writer...your English and flow of language is simply superb. 👏

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swetha03

@swetha03

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

superb update dear...
I am feeling nice when reading a story of chutties maan and geet. ttheir language is so funny and innocent.

geet is chashmish here😆😆😆

so so refreshing.

thanks for your stories with childhood and teenage maan and geet.

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Interesting start dear

Loved it !! Eloquently penned.

Geet happened to witness Maan and Sasha together. Guess it was a friendly hug. Geet bumped on Maan as she was riveted into world of her books. The onlookers were shocked and befuddled with the turn of events. They anticipated Maan to vent out his anger for which he was famous for but out of blue Maan mellowed his demeanor towards Geet and addressed Geet by her name. Maan knowing Geet's name stupefied the onlookers as Geet was considered to be a typical dweeb with obsolete fashion sense. Loved Geet's persona protrayed here. Maan supported Geet Infront of onlookers and Riyana. Through his gestures it lookslike he has soft corner for Geet. Geet was hurt that like others Maan too smiled at her mockingly but guess Maan was genuine with his smile and maybe smiled at her gestures of taking glances at him. Loved Maaneet's cute little past scene. Past was Beautifully Incorporated. Maan is friend of Geet's brother as well. Maaneet are intentionally avoiding each other vowing to their intense fight.

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder !!

Thanks for updating.

:))

Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago