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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#241

awesome update ruhi

Gete was shattered to know that there were more than one man who were behind the death of mahi

so mahi was Geet's twin sister..

was he gang raped before her death?

lol iss sam ko dekh ke sach me mujhe bhi irritation ho rahi hai like Maan

he wants to get rid of her and she is chipking more to him..

haila

Geet was drinking and making it a mess in the bar..

Bar tender was so much troubled by her..

Maan recognised her and finally he got rid of Sam and came to see Geet

and knew that there was something which was hurting her

lol geet ka comic sense achha ho jata hai shayad nashe me😆

iss haalt me geet dance kaise karegi? pakka maan ka pair todegi🤣

waiting for next

Edited by gorgeousqueen. - 7 years ago

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Nice update

Geet is totally shattered

Poor her also Maan is falling for her

Hope he heal her pain

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Nice update..

Thank you for PM..

Waiting for next update..

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#244

So Mahi was Geet's twin and the reality of her death is causing so much anguish in her. Its good that Maan is also in that disc to keep her safe. waiting for next. Thanks for pm.

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Nav2010

@Nav2010

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Really nice one. Geet is drunk and maan taking care of geet. Cant wait to read story move forward.

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#246

very sad update

maan is taking care of drunken geet

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Awful n sad ud 😭
Very sad 4 mahi
So geet is drinking
Hw come annie didnt recognize geet if she is mahi's twin
I might have missed some points sorry 4 that
Then geet is drunk n she is cute as hell
Aw she called maan cute n his tedha he he he
Maan taking care of her so nice
Waiting 4 next
Thnx 4 updating n pm

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Maangeet

@maangeet.gmmg

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#248

nyc update superb feeling bad for geet

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#249

maan kaise sambhalega geet ko...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#250

thanks 4 da pm! intense emotional update! superbly written! Geet shattered! so Mahi was her twin! Geet goes 2 the disc! Sam drags Maan there! she annoys Maan! Geet drinks and is creating a mess! Maan gets rid of Sam! Maan goes to see Geet! he tries 2 handle Geet! Geet is drunk! she blabbers away and Maan curious who she is talking about! update soon