MG ff. Humdard. Thread. 2. Pg. 1.

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Shaun

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Prologue is captivating

it seems like Geet had a tough life while for some reason it seems now Maan will be kind off obsessed and wants to bring Geet back home

Character sketch is very interesting

Maan is a businessmen and lives with his Daadi his only family

Geet is an orphan and lives away from her family

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T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: uluvmg
Congratulations for new story with fabulous C.H...nice prologue...maan had dadi & others were enjoying with his money...geet who lost her parents but had her chachi & sis as family & was doing MBBS...her friends her strength... excited to know why geet had tears to see gift sent by her chachi...thanks for pm...!!

Hankins

Let see what is in that gift that make Geet cry😊

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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

nice prologue n awsum ch
cont soon...

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Prologue is enticing lots of mystery held

while character sketch is interesting

waiting for the first chapter

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Nav2010

@Nav2010

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Very nice starting! Cant wait to read more.

Edited by Nav2010 - 7 years ago

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

nice cs..

thnx for d pm..

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SillySoni

@SillySoni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Nice CS but why you change Samrat Gunjan and Mayank Nupur names😕

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Waiting for this one ... Plzz update soon 😳😃

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Waiting for this one ... Plzz update soon 😳😃

Updating😳

Edited by T.Peru - 7 years ago

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#110

Teaser

Geet look at parcel which she receive from her bari maa and tears were following from her eyes and then she pick up her parents frame and then hug it with parcel and thought

G. Miss you mama papa, hope you were with me then like everyone I can tell you that soon your daughter is going to doctor also I promise you both that I will tried to save every person and let let any small baby as orphan

Edited by T.Peru - 7 years ago

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