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Sowmiya

@anu5

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Congrats for the new story dear !

Interesting concept and character sketch

Maaneet were bound to each other since their birth and with time their emotions intensifies to its folds but is it love r hate !!?

Looking forward to the story line

:))

Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Nice start dear

Liked it!!

Is seems like Geet was insecure abt Maan's love for her. She provoked him to prove his love for her. Geet is really possessive for Maan. Maan realised that he crossed fine line of the relationship and was assuring Geet that he loves her and doesn't regret the happenings that took place between them.

Looking forward to Maaneet's love with madness.

Thanks for the pm!

Will be waiting for the next update

:))

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Ramjanki

@Ramjanki

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Chapter2

Soon both get ready but geet was happy as now she know no matter what maan won't leave her and maan he was lost somewhere not understanding what to do to first he was not even aware what cause their family to part their ways and secondly Geet her day by day changing behaviour was scaring him . It's almost 3 years but both were not aware of what happen suddenly b/w their families .

He still rember that night geet come to him crying out loud he engulfe her in his arms but she was no where to stop .
Once & twice she try to end her life too .

He too love her and can't leave without her but her love now start scaring him .

He don't wanna lose her . He know very well they both crossed limit last night but he know very well too if he haven't done that then surely she will harm herself to the extent that none even imagine.

Geet observed him getting ready and she clearly see him lost . She was getting scared by his silance will he leave her?

She come toward him and hug him causing him to come out from his thoughts .

She clutched him tightly . Her condition was same like a scared kitten .

Maan immidately noticed her change of emotions and hug her tightly .

M- what happen jaan?
G- u will not marry her ! Will u?
M- tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho . That i'll marry any other girl .
G- par apki dadi ne toh kl announcment ki thi n . Aapne bhi mana nhi kia
M- jaan i was schoked .mujhe nhi pta tha that dadi pull a stunt like that
Pulling him more toward herself if it was possible she say
G- AAP SIRF MERE HO .
In return he place a kiss on her forehead .

M- we need to go now .
G- NHI MUJHE NHI JANA
M- but
G- nhi mujhe nhi jana . Main aapke sath hi rahungi!
M- suno toh
G- nhi geet say with finality in her voice ..
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Khurana mantion

WHAT WAS THAT? - SAVITRI DEVI yelled

S- was it the way? Maan left without saying anything .
S- meera ki family kya sochagi hamare bare main .
Maan is going to marry meera he must behave.

Maa may be he was schoked so left Ram ( maan father ) replied
R- give him some time he will be back definatly
P- haa maa
S- inform him Ram where ever he is i want him back home by evening .
..

Nxt - not yet decided

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Lovely update something happened between maaneet family members that Dadi had announced that maan will marry Meera though maan didn't say anything but he himself was confused with his family behavior he knows he Cross every limit with geet only to save her and her love was scaring him maan refuse to marry Meera but Dadi hell bent on getting maan married to Meera

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Nice update dear

Liked it!!

Maaneet's families broke their friendship and parted their ways and the reason behind their torn friendship is still unknown to Maaneet. Due to the broken friendship between both the families Geet is scared to lose Maan. Geet turned possessive and obsessive for Maan and his love that made her stubborn. Dadima announcement regarding Maan's marriage with Meera made geet scared to lose Maan.

Thanks for the pm !

Will be waiting for the next update

:))

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DreamyMadhu

@Dreamy30

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

nice update
dadi want maan to marry meera
geet love maan like crazy
they cross their limits
waiting fr the nxt prt

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

thanks 4 da pm! wonderful update! well written! dadi announces Maan;s marriage 2 Meera! wt happened btwn Handas n Khuranas? Geet angry abt Maans marriage! he assures her! dadi upset with Maan! update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Fantastic Chapter

So Maan's Daadi announced that Maan will marry Meera and this made Geet feel insecure

and perhaps thats the reason she had spend the night with him as now she knows that he belongs to her but deep within herself she is scared of the outcome

while Maan's Daadi seems stern she tells his father that she wants Maan home

it seems like both Maan and Geet will come to Khurana mansion together upsetting his Daadi even more

waiting for next chapter