VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 8

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CHAPTER 4


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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"First, you will work in KC as Geetika Handa my PA and not as Garv Handa."

"Yes Sir."

"Second, you will have lunch and dinner with me daily."

"Lunch and dinner with you daily? But in what capacity, Sir? As your PA, my duties don't include having lunch and dinner with you daily."

"As my fiancee."

"WHAT? FIANCEE? But we have just met and you are my boss." Geet's head was spinning with these recent developments and she held on to chair before she falls down.

"My mother is very keen to see me married but I don't want to marry ever as I don't believe in the institution of marriage."

"Then why don't you try to explain to her."

"I have a number of times but she refuses to listen."

"Sir, how can I...? I have to ask my brother."

"When you had no qualms about acting like your brother to save his job, then why are you hesitating to play a role of my fiancee?" Geet was in deep thought what to do? She couldn't even contact Garv. "Remember if you refuse, not only will Garv loose his job, but also you brother-sister duo will rot in jail. No one cheats Maan Singh Khurana and gets away with it!!" Maan's eyes were sparkling with deep golden yellow sparks.

"Sir, can't you ask your girlfriend to pose as your fiancee?"

"I don't have a girlfriend!"

"Why don't you hire an actress she will be more convincing?"

"Miss Handa stop finding excuses. Tell me are you willing to play the role of my fiancee or not?"

Unable to find anymore excuses, Geet finally relented,"Alright Sir, I will play the role of your fiancee but I too have one condition."

"Miss Handa, I don't think you are in position to put conditions!"

"Fine, Mr. Khurana, then I refuse to play the role of your fiancee, you can do whatever you want." Geet turned on her heel but before she could walk away Maan said, "What is your condition?"

"YOU WILL NOT TOUCH ME!"

"If I don't touch you, how will I convince my mother that we both are in love?"

"I have no solution for that."

Geet was about to exit Maan's cabin when he said in an icy cold voice, "Kindly now go and dress as Geetika Handa, PA to MD of Khurana Constructions!"

"Yes Sir!"

Geet returned after an hour, wearing a crisp cotton saree. Maan was totally smitten seeing her.



Her slim milky white waist peeking through the saree arousing him no end and her hair tied in a bun.



Just then phone rang and Geet left.

A week passed. In this week Geet was introduced as Maan's fiancee to his mother, his brother,Vicky and whole of KC staff. Maan used his position as a boss and a fiance to the fullest. He would call Geet to his cabin for anything big or small! Some people would be amused i.e. Kumudini, Vicky, Meera and Adi; whereas some would be irritated i.e. Pinky(due to Maan, Geet and Pinky's best friend's time was reduced) and Munshiji (he felt that Geet has ursurped his daughter, Sasha's position!). Every night it was unspoken code that Geet was expected to dine at Maan's home. Kumudini(Kumud) pampered Geet. As in Geet Kumud got a daughter which she always longed for. Kumud was also highly impressed by Geet's simplicity, soft spokeness, respect and compassion. Vicky was highly impressed with Geet's culinary skill and every day demanded a new mouth watering dish much to Maan's annoyance.

Today, Geet was in kitchen since afternoon making "dal-batti" for Vicky,



palak paneer for Maan and kheer for Kumud.



She had come in afternoon as it was Saturday, half day in KC as well as Maan had gone to Nainitaal to sign a business deal. Although she was play acting and Geet did not need to go out of her way and do all this but she liked both Kumud and Vicky. In Kumud she found a mother whom she never had and in Vicky a brother. She entered KC to be recieved by their head servant cum cook, Nakul. Initially Nakul was against Geet as he felt that his authority on kitchen was being ursurped. But once Kumud explained that Geet is the future daughter-in-law of Khuranas and Nakul at once mellowed down and started calling her "Bhabhiji". Geet also started calling Nakul "Kaka". Geet had gone to freshen up in guest room while the whole Khurana family returned. Soon everyone was sitting on the dining table. Geet was about to get up to serve hot battis for Vicky when Maan thundered holding her hand, "TUM BEITHI RAHO. NAKUL AUR BAAKI SAB NAUKAR SERVE KAR DENGE!" (You keep sitting. Nakul and rest of the servants will serve.) Both Maan and Geet didn't realise that Maan had touched Geet. Kumud and Vicky were full of praises for Geet's cooking. Maan also grudgingly admitted that food was "nice" after finishing whole bowl of palak paneer as well as last drop of sugar free kheer.

Soon it was time for Geet to leave when Kumud said, "Maan abb tum Geet se jald se jald shaadi karlo mai apni beti se aur door nahi reh sakti!" (Maan now you get married to Geet as soon as possible as I can no longer be away from my daughter.)

"Haan Maa! Abb mai bhi door nahi reh sakta." (Yes Mom! Now even I can't bear the distance!) Maan said giving Geet a passionate look.



Geet was blushing profusely.



"Shaadi ke baad toh bhai hummei ghass bhi nahi dalenge. Sab time Geet se chipke beithe rahenge!" (After his marriage, bro will not even look in our direction, he will always be glued to Geet.) Vicky teased. Making Geet blush even more.

"Chup rahe shaitan! Aur Geet ko "bhabhi" bulane ki aadat daal." (Stop being impertinent! Now start calling Geet "bhabhi".)

"Geet meri choti behan pehle hai toh mai usse..." (Geet is my younger sister first so I will...)

"Bhaiya, aap aur hum humara rishta jaante hain, toh isse kya faraq padhta hai ki aap mujhe kiss naam se bulayen?" (Bhaiya, you and I know what our relation is? How does it matter by which name you call me?)

"Geet chalo der ho rahi hai." (Geet hurry up! Its getting late!) Maan said hurrying Geet as he wanted some private time with her. Geet touched Kumud's feet and left for her home.

On reaching her apartment before she could insert her key in the lock, the door was swung open by an extremely furious Garv.


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Nice update 👍🏼
Ab geet Maan ki fiance bann gayi... All happy at maan's place
How will garv react now
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CHAPTER 5

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

On reaching her apartment before she could insert her key in the lock the door was swung open by an extremely furious Garv.

Garv looked at Geet with his icy blue eyes and said,"Geetika, aap andar jaayiye hum aap se baad mein vartalaap karenge." (Geetika, go inside, I will talk to you later.) Calming slightly so that his eyes return to normal he looked at Maan and he said, "Mr. Khurana hummei aapse akele mein baat karni hai." (Mr. Khurana, I would like to talk to you in privacy.) Once they were away from Geet and Garv's apartment block, Garv thundered,"Mr. Khurana, you maybe a big boss in KC but this is my home and Geetika is my sister."

Maan spoke in his unaffected icy cool authoritative voice,"You should have thought of that before sending Geet as your imposter."

"But that was only because..."

"Of KC rules!" Maan concluded, his voice getting icier.

"Mr. Khurana, aap meri behan ke saath, itni der raat tak kahaan the? Aapne zara bhi nahi socha ki agar humare kissi bhi padosi ne dekh liya hota ki Geet itni der se ghar aayi hai toh uski kitni badnami hogi." (Mr. Khurana, what were you doing with my sister so late at night? You didn't even once give it a thought that if any of our neighbours saw you both this late in night, how humiliating it will be for Geet and me?) Garv said fuming.

"Maine kuch galat nahi kiya hai. Geet meri mangetar hai." (I have done nothing wrong. Geet is my fiancee.) Maan informed.

"KYA? Yeh sab kaise hua?" (WHAT? When did all this happen?)

"Ussi tehre jaise Geet, Garv bankar KC aayee. Tumhei chinta karne ki zarurat nahi hai Garv! Mai kal hi Geet ke saath shaadi kar loonga." (It happened just like it happened when she came dressed as Garv to KC. You have nothing to worry Garv! I will marry Geet tomorrow!)

"Aap Geet se shaadi nahi kar sakte." (No you can't marry Geet.)

"KYUN?" (Why?)

"Kyunki Geet ki shaadi bachpan mei hi tai ho gayi thee." (Because Geet's marital alliance has already been fixed in childhood.)

"Waise toh meri shaadi bhi bachpan mein tai hui thee. Shaadi tai hi toh hui thee. Shaadi toh nahi hui thee naa?" (Even my marital alliance was fixed in childhood. Her marital alliance had only been fixed. But she is not married?)

"Haan. Shaadi nahi hui thee. Magar..." (Yes she is not married. But...)

"Agar, magar kuch nahi. Tum chaho toh mai tumhare badhon se baat kar loon warna mai apni Maa ko bhej doon tumhare gharwalon se baat karne ke liye." (No ifs and buts.. If you would like, I can talk to your elders or I can ask my mother to talk to them.) Hearing Maan's words Garv went into deep thought till Maan shook him and said, "Garv, GaRV, GARRV! Kya hua?" (Garv, GaRV, GARRV! What happened?)

"Kuch nahi. Accha mujhe ek hafte ka samay dijiye mai ghar par baat karke aapko batta hoon.." (Nothing. Alright give me a week's time. I will talk with my family and let you know.)

"Theek hai sirf ek hafta. Agar iss ek hafte mein tumne jawaab "HAAN", mei nahi diya toh mai Geet ke saath mandir mein shaadi kar loonga. Kyunki Geet mere siwaye kissi aur ki nahi ho sakti! " (Alright only a week. If in this one week I don't get an answer in YES, I will get married to Geet in a temple. Because Geet can never be anyone else's but mine!) Seeing Garv once again in deep thought Maan said, "Ek baat aur, agar tumne Geet aur Meri shaadi rokne ki koshish kari toh tum dono bhai-behan jaalsaazi ke ilzaam mein jail mein hoge. SAMJHE!" (One more thing, if you try to stop Geet and my marriage, I will get you both brother and sister duo arrested on charges of fraud. UNDERSTOOD!)

"Ji! Magar aapko bhi mujhse ek vaada karna hoga. Jab tak mai apne gharwalon se baat nahi kar leta aur unhei samjha nahi leta, aap Geet se naa toh milenge, naa hi uske paas aayenge aur naa hi usse chooenge! Boliye manzoor hai?" (Fine. But you also have to promise me, that until I don't talk and convince my family members, you will NOT meet Geet, you will not come near her or touch her. Do you agree?)

"HAAN MUJHE MANZOOR HAI!" (YES I'M AGREEABLE)

After Maan left, Garv went back home. Seeing tense Geet he went and rubbed her back. "Aap pareshaan kyun ho rahi hain?" (Why are you worried?)

"Bhai-sa, hum Mr. Khurana ki mangetar swiccha se nahi banne. Unhone aapko naukari se nikalne aur jail bhijwane hi dhamaki di thee. Khair yeh sab chodiye jiss karye ke liye aap gaye the woh sampoorn hua? Jeeja ji ka koi samachaar?" (Bhai-sa, I did not become Mr. Khurana's fiancee out of free will. He threatened me that he will fire you from your job and will get both of us arrested on charges of fraud and impersonation. Anyway forget all this. Were you able to complete your mission? Were you able to locate brother-in-law?)

"Nahi Rajkunwar ke baare mein koi samchaar nahi. Parantu ek Sukhad samchaar hai ki Pitaji aur Maa-sa ne aapko ghar bulaya hai." (No there is no news of Prince. But there is a good news that mother and father have called you home.)

"Ghar???" (Home??)

"Chaliye abhi vishram karte hain. Kal sochte hain kya karna hai kyunki Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ne aap ke liye vivaah prastav bheja hai." (Comer lets rest. We will decide tomorrow what to do next as Mr. Khurana has sent a marriage proposal for you.)

"KYA? Hummei toh kewal yeh gyat thaa ki woh humse apni "mangetar" banne ka swaang rachna chahte hain." (What? I was under the impression that I was only to play act as his "fiancee".)

"Geetika, hum jaante hain ki aap Mr. Khurana ko bahut aakarshit hain, kintu woh ek manushye hain aur hum... Khair iske baare mein kal baat karenge. Shubh ratri!" (Geetika, I know you are attracted to Mr. Khurana but he belongs to human form and we are... anyway we will discuss tomorrow. Good night!) Both brother and sister went to bed.

Next day being Sunday was holiday so Maan despite of wanting could not meet Geet as well as he had promised Garv that he will not contact, meet or touch Geet. Maan was eagerly waiting for Saturday so he could talk to Garv about Geet and his marriage. Monday came and went as Maan was neck deep in work. Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday also passed in so much work that Maan was unable to go doing office hours to KC. Friday being public holiday Garv was not going to be in KC. Maan was impatiently waiting for Saturday. On Saturday, when Maan reached Garv and Geet's apartment, he found front main door being forced open



and ajar. Apartment in a disarray i.e. sofa ripped open; paintings slit open; clothes from the cupboards pulled out;



broken crockery lying about;



and Garv & Geet missing.

FIVE MONTHS PASSED

Kumudini found Maan yelling at someone on the phone, "I'm not paying to bloody this major amount to hear this nonsense. You cannot find two missing adults. I know that there is a strong possibility of their being kidnapped. But you are Private Detectives for God sake! I'm giving you 24 hrs. If in next 24hours you don't give me any result, I'll close down your agency!" Maan disconected the phone in anger and whispered to himself, "Sab manushye kaamchor hain. Geet tum kahaan ho...?"(All humans are lazy. Geet where are you?)

Kumudini went near Maan and said, "Maan Geetika kahaan hai?" (Maan where is Geetika?)

"Kaash mujhe maloom hota, Maa. Maine manushye yoni aur humari yoni mein badal kar bhi dhoonda magar mujhe woh dono nahi mile. Maine private detectives ka bhi sahare liya aur Geet aur Garv ko kitna dhoondha magar woh dono mujhe nahi mile." (I wish I knew. I searched for Garv and Geet in human form as well as my birth form but could not find them. I even hired private detectives to search Geet and Garv but could not find them.)

"Maan, aap ne iss baat ka dhyaan nahi diya hi Geet manushye yoni ki hai aur aap..." (Maan, I hope you are aware that Geet is of human form and you are...)



"Maa, Geet aur mai ek hi yoni ke hain. Kyunki uske shareer mein se bhi wohi gaandh (smell) aati hai jo mere shareer mein se aati hai!" (Geet and I are of the same form. Because her body gives same odour as mine!) Mother and son were quite for sometime both deep in their thoughts, when Maan said, "Patta nahi kyun Maa, mujhe lag raha hai Garv Geet ko mere se shaadi se bachaane ke liye yeh "kidnapping" ka natak kiya hai." (I don't know why Mom, I feel that Garv has staged this drama of "kidnapping" to prevent Geet from marrying me.) Maan said in anger. But suddenly Maan sniffed and said, "Yeh "gandh" yeh gandh kaisi hai? (Smell what is this smell?)

"Gandh" kaunsi gandh?" ("Smell" what smell?)
Just then there was a bright light and a creature was seen. He bowed respectfully and said, "YUVRAJ AAPKO SHEEGR ATI SHEEGR WAPIS BULAYA HAI. RAJMATA KA SWATHIYE SAHI NAHI HAI!" (Crowned Prince you have been summoned as Queen Mother is seriously ill!)
Unknown to mother son, their conversation was heard by some one who went unnoticed by either mother or son as the creature was camouflaged in the colour of the walls!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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great update
maan fore both to agree for marriage but both brother n sister vanish showing as kidnap
maan is not able to find them
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Chapter 3...
Awesome..


Superb..


Thanks for update..

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Geet as Garv noticed the flaws in the blue print n helped Maan ...

Maan came to know that it was geet n not Garv ...

He confronted her n made a deal with her ...

Geet is now his PA as well as fiancee...
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Chapter 4..

Superb... Interesting..


Thanks for update..

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Geet got along well with khuranas n everyone liked her..

Garv came back n asked maan to stay away from geet...

Maan gave marriage proposal for geet n Garv asked him a week's time to talk to his family...
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Chapter 5...
Awesome
.. interesting..

Thanks for update
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Thanks for pm..

Continue soon...

Geet's parents called her home...

Garv n geet missing n it's been five months...

Maan is unable to trace them ..

I feel what maan is thinking is right... They might have gone away to avoid the marriage...

Maan is called back home as his mother is unwell...

Someone is overhearing them but who...
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Chapter 4

Maan tells Geet now that she has been caught first she'll have to dress as Geet Handa his PA
and secondly she will have to dine with him every night as his fiancee
and Geet agrees with a condition that Maan cannot touch her at all
everyday Geet is at the Khurana home and Maan's family already love her
seems like Garv has found out about Geet because he is furious
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completely hooked to this..
different concept ..
loving d way d story is taking shape...
very well written..
great going...
continue n do pm me...

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