Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">😳, waiting for your res dear!</font>

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@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Awesome update as always. Flawless writing. Crisp scenes. Really liking the way this story is unfolding. So sameera ki jealousy din din badhti jaa rahi hain woh insaan buri nahi hain, balki kafi acchi lagti hain. Par woh maaneet k bich aa chuki hai isliye chahte huwe bhi cant like her.
Maan ne akhir bata diya dadi ko, bohot accha kiya. Dadi bohot acchi hain, show ki yaad dila diya.
Maaneet ke romance haye
Maan feeding geet so cutely and she is pouting. Maan really loves her so much and she is so so so adorable. At the beginning of the story how much geet loves him that was being told nd now we are seeing the deep love of Maan.
Pata nahi aisa laag raha hain something evil is going to happen. Sam ki papa mujhe bilkul acche sound nahi ki..aab jaldi jaldi precap dedo aur ho sakey toh predestined update karo please. Waiting
Thanks a lot for updating and sharing you fantastic writing with us Love you.

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Kamaal hain ... Fantastic update ... Loved this update 😳😃

So they were sleeping holding each other when dadima annie and sam came ...lol cant stop laughing imagining the plight of maan while waking her up from her deep sleep ... 😳🤣 and i was literally waiting for geet to blabber something so that they both could be embarassed 😆 but she didnt do that ... 😆 bach gaya maan ... And annie stopping her laugh and dadi doesnt want to make her grandson embarass so she handled the situation and sam is jealous ... Somewhere i feel pity for sam .. omg i was shocked by knowing that her mother married someone two years back ?? 🤔 something is fishy ... I dont like this father of sam ... I think he is greedy .. Thats y he married sams mother and showing fake concern and love so that he could get maan and sam married and make money ... Aisa ho bhi saktha hain na bhi ho saktha hain .. Lekin yeh mera blind guess ...loved dadi teasing ...omgg maan is blusing 😳😳 finally he asked permission from dadi to marry geet 😆 and even sam father is coming to fix sams alliance ... Hope yeh sam ki confusion clear hojayegi ... Feeling bad for sam .. 😕 maans love fpr geet is never ending ... Its growing more and more 😳 and bichara maan cant wait for marriage ... Dadi ke saamne bhi 🤣 seedha shadi chahiye banda ko .. Mujhe lagtha hain shaadi nahin seeda suhag raat honi chahiye kyunki dono ki shadi tho hogayi na 🤣

Maan bahuth besharam hogaya 😆 want to give shower to geet lolzz 😆 and ab last mein kisne kisko fasaya ❓

Loved it dear ... Bahuth bahuth bahuth acha tha yeh update ... Loved it to the coreee ...

Lots of love and chocolates to you dear ❤️

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

thanx for pm

nice update

ab yeh new entry kon?

sam stepfather

love dadimaa teasing maan

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Lovely update, maan confessing to daadi about his and geets relation and wanted marriage ASAP. I think Sam needs to know the reality as she is making assumptions and filling her heart with hope to get maan and jealous and hatred for geet which is dangerous.

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Lovely update..

congrats for new thread...

Maan Taking of his wifey...

Sameera😡

Thanks for pm

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i rok

@i rok

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Great update...
geet and maan getting caught by dadi while sleeping
maan talking about marriage wth geet..
maan agreeing..
maan and geet cute moments
sam dreaming of marrying maan dont know what will happen wth that...
update soon

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Sam is building an air castle

everyone can see maan's care for geet but her

so how will Maan react to sam's confusion

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

thanks 4 da pm! fantabulous update! excellently written! Dadi catches Maaneet! Maan tries 2 awake her! dadi sees how Geet recognizes Maan is her sleep! dadi is very astute! Geet shcvoke seeing everyone there! Sam upset seeing Maaneet's closeness! it seems she doesn't want to accept that Maan loves Geet! she is confused abt dadi's reaction! She speaks 2 her mom! so her step dad will speak 2 Maan abt Sam n Maan's alliance! oh no! Sam should stop dreaming abt a life with Maan! Maan speaks 2 dad abt Geet! Ahh loved hw dadi teases Maan! Maan n dadi share a wonderful bond! Maan cannot wait! Dadi laughs seeing Maan desperate! but she is genuinely happy 4 Maan! I agree that Geet is the best 4 him! aww Maan is such a loving hubby! Geet certainly has him wrappedaround her finger. liked their banter! Maan didn't tell Geet dadi that he spoke 2 dadi! Geet misses her parents! Maan cannot see his wifey sad n will take her to meet them! terrific Maaneet moments! hmm hope Sam doesn't create any mu btwn Maaneet! she shld accept reality n move on! update asap 😃

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago