Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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Posted: 7 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167
Nice part
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: mayapari
Nice update !!!
Nice move geet
Finally Apne pati ko u r saying everything
Uff I thot misunderstanding track ho jaayega
Bechari sam abb kya karegi
In her anger n Jealousy she shouldn't do anything stupid
waiting for more

Thanks dear for your response.😊
Sam- well she is oblivious. Anything can happen! 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: eshalli
Awesome update sweety
Thxc 4r pm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: swapna.p
Nice update..
Continue soon..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Nice update.
It was really unexpected 😲
Dono firse ladne lage.
Geet put farward her insecurities regarding sam which angered maan.
And what he wanted to tell by geet's past incidence , and he doubt dev ?
Well he is correct in dev's matter.
Waise ek tarah se acha hua ki dono aage baat nahi kar paye warna dono ke beech matter aur badh jaata considering maan's state of mind and geet naivity.
Aww geet kitni pyaari hai yaar maan ka ek chota sa gesture aur wo saara gussa bhool gayi
Maan ki halat to kharab hui padi hai and adding to his termoil is that dreadful dream.
Hope ye thode dino ka faasla dono ko kareeb le aye.
Ipti plz don't change this track. Go ahead the way u have planned 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Thank u so much for the pm baby 🤗
Would be waiting for next part 😊

Awww. Thanks baby for your comment!.
My pleasure! 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: happydays30
Nice part
Maan has bad dream
Both dint met after their argument n maan left to London without telling her
Later he messaged her , now he is going to meet Sameera parents
Waiting for next update, wat will happen now

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Posted: 7 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167
Thanks for pm dear...
I will read and cmnt soon

ok... dear waiting 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks 4 da pm! sorry 4 late likes n comments! intense update! superbly written! Geet starts talking abt NT and Dev! she is getting to why she is helping Dev bt Maan annoyed n stops her! Maan was rude! he reveals he was there! Maan taunts her! Maaneet argue! Maan reveals his insecurities and fears! Geet hits back stating how she feels seeing him with Sameera! seems like both are insecure and possessive! Maan mentions abt Dev n Geet's history! hmm now I am curious! Did Sam's dad have 2 call then?😡he interrupts Maaneet! Geet leaves n Maan irritated! Maan upset as well! thank God it was his dream! Geet sad! she left 2 gave space 2 Maan! bt was this right? Dadi notices something is wrong with Maan! She brushes it off! ahh dadi shld have spoken 2 Maan! perhpas she cld have advised Maan! Pari and Meera manage 2 distract her! Geet misses Maan so much! loved how u described her feelings! Maan left left 2 London without telling her! why did he do that? she gets his text! Oh no Maan off 2 Australia to Sameera's house! what will happen now?? what will this trip 2 Australia bring? hope no more problems! why are Maaneet not telling anyone they love each other?? Maaneet need 2 talk abt this properly! update soon👏⭐️😊

Hi sweety, 😳

History...Aha- So you have indeed the eyes of an eagle and glad that it attracted you. The history is a very mere trivial incident however to the very possessive Maan it's kinda unbearable as he loves his doll a little too much!

Geet- Geet was a lil immature to leave Maan alone like that she should have talked it ouit but she didn't. hence now she is in pain as well.

Her feelings- Aww thanks dearie for liking my narration

Why are Maaneet not telling - Because they thought it's not necessary, by everyone you meant dev annie vicky sam i guess but Maaneet were in a long break of five years if you have forgot. Now they were just enjoying their relations and they were seeking permissions from the elders... Moreover it was Maan's plan which made Geet study here hence he doesn't want some sort of teasing forwarded towards Geet right now as they live under the same house. He has an intention to directly marrying her. That's why he told savitri right away when Geet got sick. However it's also a part of my plot as in why their relation is still not revealed. Plus to add more on that- Maan and Geet have been extremely good friends from two liberal families hence they never needed some sort of validation until that hot water incident. Other than that Maan has always been implementing his rights on Geet. Like ye maat karo, waha maat jao.. Isse maat bat karo. Vice versa with Geet. So everyone is used to their tom and jerry-ish cute bonding. i hope this explains it. Phew! 🤣

Thank a lot for your fanstastic comment! Sorry for late!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago