Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#431

thanks 4 da pm! sorry 4 late likes n comments! intense update! superbly written! Geet starts talking abt NT and Dev! she is getting to why she is helping Dev bt Maan annoyed n stops her! Maan was rude! he reveals he was there! Maan taunts her! Maaneet argue! Maan reveals his insecurities and fears! Geet hits back stating how she feels seeing him with Sameera! seems like both are insecure and possessive! Maan mentions abt Dev n Geet's history! hmm now I am curious! Did Sam's dad have 2 call then?😡he interrupts Maaneet! Geet leaves n Maan irritated! Maan upset as well! thank God it was his dream! Geet sad! she left 2 gave space 2 Maan! bt was this right? Dadi notices something is wrong with Maan! She brushes it off! ahh dadi shld have spoken 2 Maan! perhpas she cld have advised Maan! Pari and Meera manage 2 distract her! Geet misses Maan so much! loved how u described her feelings! Maan left left 2 London without telling her! why did he do that? she gets his text! Oh no Maan off 2 Australia to Sameera's house! what will happen now?? what will this trip 2 Australia bring? hope no more problems! why are Maaneet not telling anyone they love each other?? Maaneet need 2 talk abt this properly! update soon👏⭐️😊

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: dazzlingnikki
Diii whats this !! Babaji yeh masla kab teeak hoga !! Well next update keliye anxiously wait kar rahi hu
Thanku for the update 🤗

Hey baby thanks a lot for your comment, you are the first one I guess.
😃

Yes shall update very soon, it depends on the response! 😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: jssood
thank God precap is a part of maans dream
but mu is still there
hop all clear between maaneet
and love to see nt and sameera approached to maan and devs to geet
and all this handal by maan and geet

hahaha everyone is relieved that it's part of his dream...😃

MU- let's see how far that spills

Thanks for your awesome comment! 😳

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dazzlingnikki

@dazzlingnikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hey baby thanks a lot for your comment, you are the first one I guess.
😃
Yes shall update very soon, it depends on the response! 😳

I am glad that i am the first one😳

Will be waiting.😃

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: nakh5683
lovely update geet was telling maan how she was just trying to helpdev in making nt notice him but maan unknowing;ly told he saw their close dance though he tried to be casual about it but geet felt he dosent trust her geet has a past with dev which maan dosent like he dosent trust dev atound geet which jhalli dosent understand and misunderstood maan and left here maan got a call from sameera parents and geet left the room without a word maan can see dev coyuld fall for geet as nt real colors might come out and dev in his lonliness might fall for geet but he dosent know how to make geet understand both missed each other but didnt talk and maan left for london withput telling geet he did leave a msg that he will be going to sameera place aswell i take it in next chapter sam so called love bubble will burst as maan will refuse to marry her telling he loves someone else

Wow... you are one brilliant reader, how on the earth you have got that, the call was indeed from Sameera's dad! That means someone is indeed paying attention 😳😃
As it was sameera's dad. And he just called him to inform Maan that he can't come to india as he was about to come.😊 That's why he had to to go and pay him a visit!
Lovely analysis...
Thanks a lot for your brilliant comment! 😳

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#436

Guess it's the start of new phase in Maaneet's life. Mortal Promises!! Promises are meant to be broken because it's a worst thing to let a promise break you !!

Beautiful update dear

Liked it !! Flawlessly penned.

Maaneet's turmoil and thoughts are well protrayed. Geet started to share her thoughts and words regarding Dev and NT's fiasco. But , their talk took turn with Maan's words which made geet to let out her insecurities regarding Sameera's closeness with him. Her words made Maan possessive for her and he could envision Dev falling for her vowing to the turn of events. Maan's thoughts are backed by so much of insecurities and low spirits that his dreams regarding geet's closeness with dev was haunting him. Both are restless with turns of events. Geet wants to give their relationship a room to breathe as she doesn't want to let out words in haste and to regret later whilst Maan wanted to sort things between them. Maaneet didnt confront each other aftermath their little arguments and Geet was disheartened that Maan didn't inform him about his schedule prior hand and felt sad that he didn't talk to her. Guess he was giving space for both to think about their thoughts, Feelings and opinion and was also in guilt for bringing their past between their arguments. Sometimes arguments erupt like an unforeseen squall on the ocean, blind siding both the partners. Surviving these surprises increases resiliency to confrontational situation by increasing the trust in the relationship.

A soulmate relationship isn't only about peaches and creams, it's roses with thorns !!

Thanks for the pm !

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Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: AYAZU12
fantastic update dear... so the precap was only maan's dream and thank God for that but why he had such a dream, is it that subconsciously he has started doubting geet and what history he was talking about...they didn't even finish their conversation regarding this and were interrupted by the call and Maan too left to London without informing geet just left a text which upset geet a lot...hope everything turns out to be fine soon...and yeah we never want you to change your story plot because of us you are an awesome writer and we just love your updates so continue as you have planned...thnx for the pm...continue soon...

Why did he had such a dream? very simple reason and shall find out soon... Pretty much within 2 updates I guess...
And no am never gonna change my plots due to the pressure of my readers if it's unjustified with the pace or unnatural. But yes I certainly take into consideration of all your responses as everyone is different hence the different perspective. But everything always can't be happy happy then there would be nothing left to write...😃
Thank you very much being so supportive and understanding at the same time. 😳
yes will update very soon!!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

sorry commenting now...

Oh..no problem dearie...Thanks for your comment! 😳🤗

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: tabby999
So now it's the start for the promises to be broken...thats why mortal promises is the name of this maneet story...feeling bad seeing maan behaviour ..he is hurt no doubt but his silence can cost maneet a lot ...he can't see what Sam up to but he can feel dev falling for geet thus he is angry ..now two days he had not talk to geet and now going to Sam house where don't know what things will be planned by Sam's dad ..
Hope this misunderstanding remove soon
Thanks for the update
Waiting for the next

I have been itching to write this into my replies when I have some reviews like please don't separate or create mu between them, And all i wanted to tell them is look at the name of the story. Why the promises are mortal here? Anyway now let's see how they escape or can't escape the fire which is gradually kindling itself!
Is he silent due to his dejected heart or there is some other reason?
regarding sam's dad- that shall be known within next two updates as what he has planned!
Thanks a lot for your comment sweety! 😳

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: Iptida

Confused as in there is no bleak of chance the readers tolerate within maaneet relation, how will the story progress! 😭
And why with my stories only?

they never tolerate such thinks in other stories as well

just take it as a compliment that u have made such an impact with ur writing on all the readers 😊